Reviews for Naruto: Rise and Fall
Asura435 chapter 9 . 6/25
Thank you all for following
allentey chapter 8 . 11/23/2017
i like ur story, even tho the early chapter is weird but the later chapter make t worth to follow it. i have read too much loving and too justice naruto type and i sick of it. This one is perfectly suit for me at the moment. i dont care about grammar as long as i can read and understand it bcoz i have read a raws novel from chinese turn to english, and i will say its 10 time worst grammar ever and i still understand wht they say.
mustank chapter 1 . 10/25/2017
yup no thanks
Guest chapter 4 . 10/2/2017
Um, excuse me? What the fuck just happened?
Seta88 chapter 1 . 9/29/2017
The beginning with Kaguya was already strange, but you surpassed it with Naruto following Don Kriegs commands without reason for it, after only minutes after arriving.
So I follow what Lazymanjones96 said and say no thanks.
bladetri chapter 3 . 9/28/2017
like XD
Alex Antony chapter 2 . 9/25/2017
good story
Guest chapter 1 . 9/23/2017
please re-read and edit your story.. don't use 'U' for 'You' and stick to one perspective, first person or third person. Choose!
bladetri chapter 2 . 9/24/2017
like XD
Lazymanjones96 chapter 1 . 9/24/2017
No thanks