UGH this was SO good and addictive, I hope you continue this! can't wait to see more 3

This is a unique take on a Tom and Hermione story, hope you update this lovely fic someday.

Update please! Its been what give or take 5 years. This story is too good to be left unfinished

This so good ff, where's the next?

This chapter was incredible. Amazing, I love how love starts to corrupt Tom. I didn't think he in 1979 and with the Granger's for parents he could be a better man but in a way he is. The only thing that worries me is what will happen to the parents when their relationship moves forward. Because to all of magical society they are already "siblings". The Gaunts and their incestuous tendencies...

This chapter was sublime. I was afraid Krum would have drunk the poison and kissed Hermione, that would have been a pretty tense conflict and it would have backfired on Tom. I saw that you were having a hard time moving forward with the story because you feel that the narrative you've constructed so far is too flattering to Tom, I disagree so far. We notice his abusive behaviours and how he's completely insane. You're building a solid, interesting and quite unexpectedly focused storyline because it's very much him. It's not OOC at all and it's amazing that he's actually in his brotherly role with her, he genuinely believes he's acting like one and not a mean boyfriend. What you could do to not feel so uncomfortable with what you've written so far, if I may be so bold and advise, is to take it as the above was exacerbated by Hermione's inexperience and age in her approach and mature the narrative to change it and focus on the above analysis. As if Hermione didn't have all the tools before and now she's starting to get a glimpse of his true personality. I could give it a realistic feel and you'd save yourself the rewrite. English is not my first language and I hope it doesn't sound bad what I've said, but I'm loving your story and I'd like to give you a gentle nudge to continue with my best intentions. You really was/will carried this story in a good way.

I love this story so much! Your writing is awesome please do come back to this when you get a chance!

Omg it was really good please update!

cute little creep

this has, and will always be, my favourite chapter. the angst, the kiss, the fight, omg everything just makes me cry every time I read it AHHHHH

please update. I love this story so much! I beg!

Today is Sept. 26, 2022 and I have been periodically checking on this; Please please please up I’ve been waitin for this to continue since u first went on hiatus this story is too good to leave unfinished! Who’s with me let’s get a petition started.

Please continue. I consider this one of the best Hermione fan fictions I have ever read. Your writing, plot trajectory, and character development are incredibly talented. This story is something special!

same time next year, or 3 years from now? I really am hoping you will return to this I reread it a couple of times already

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