Desculpe, mas não vou terminar isso
A história simplesmente foi pro caralho skksskksksks
Era pra ser simples, mas vc se perdeu nas ideias

Such a good plot of fanfiction, and such a mediocre continuation of it. I am very disappointed with this fanfiction and how the author ruined everything.

up?

This whole ascended nonsense is pretty ass, villains like that are infuriating to read about and not in a good way.

the TF2 reference keeps rolling off the conveyor belt .

Here is my take on one of the encounters kiri remembered
Kiri was sitting in her chair, glancing out at the window curiously, she closed her eyes, her mind once more allowing itself to wonder to old memories
This one takes place at the harbor:
(1 year before meeting izuku)
At the harbor beach in Hosu City Koichi Hamawairi also known as The Crawler and Kiri were both walking together at the area, the two of them were informed that some sneaky activity has been going on in this place, it sure looks beautiful out here doesn't it," said Koichi, his face forming his genuine smile.
"Mm" kiri nodded, though her face looked serious she was rather pleased to be here at this beach at this time, she had seen so many people come here that she had almost wished that she could go here with onii san.
"Geez, did we seriously have to pick this place as our hangout", pop was in her mask and costume, in her hand was a popcicle, she looked to the left abd saw both Gentle and La Brava were both out getting themselves ice cream, "at this point we'll be lucky if we get to the pier in time", Koichi chuckled as he took a bite out of his grsnola bar
He hands it tp kiri who seemed like she was starving today she had a concert to be set there as there will be many people attending there, "we'll get there on time pop, kiri here just thought it would be a great time to start patrolling here for a bit," he gave her a calm smile, "besides i think you will do great on your performance today.
Pop blushed furiously, before she began to bop his head repeatedly, "don't tell me what i wanna hear," she cried, La Brava noticed and laughed at the scene oh dear said gentle having finished getting their ice cream.
The four of them made it to the pier where Pop would make her live performance, Brava was filming the whole scene on her camera, kiri was back in her child form, she was listening intently to the song, "so mesmerizing" she had only been to pops concerts once and she was already a big fan of the young gorls talent.

Mr Gold would be there too, but he decided to stay behind, deciding to continue patrolling these lonely parts 'pops concert must be happening right now" he thought to himself "i'll leave the others to enjoy it" as much as he would like he knows he shouldn't rest when there is justice to be spread out here.
Pop's little concert would go on for a few minutes before she ended it with a flashy wink and disappearing in a ray of light.
They would walk back out, "got that all on tape", announced brava, holding her camera up, 'this'll hit the views for sure", kiri nodded slightly her head bobbing up and down.
AAAAAUUUUUGGHH
Suddenly a loud deep growl came in the air, they turned around, a large lizard person with white eyes and a yellow tongue rose from a crowd, "it's a villain" one of the citizens yelled out. The whole gang sprung to action, Koichi put on his costume and slid himself right over to the thing, Kiri instsntly turned back to her Valkyrie form and followed him, "this thing is huge", he called out, "evacuate the citizens quickly."
Pop nodded, she jumped over to the running citizens and Gentle both head over to take the citizens to safety, meanwhile the giant creature was currently destroying everything in it's path with it's giant hands, Kiri flew up towards the creature and began to hit it repeatedly in the head, Koichi would continue to slide down trying to find somewhere they can catch him off guard " Valkyrie on me" he said, he began to lead the thing away from the populated area and started directing him to the pier bridge
Kiri seeing what he was doing gave the man one last punch before sending him imto a ray of water, the mutant was

Please update soon

Birb boy really said "Stand users are drawn to other stand users

class B is becoming an army lol

Pretty good so far needs updates though.

Seems interesting that is for sure. wonder when he will realize he has a quirk though lol. and that she is number one. needs updates though.

you know this hurts to read not becus its bad writen but beccus i feel her feelings and its just sad

me da un poco de enojo con su Quirk. ella preocupada con salvar a personas y no se preocupa de salvar a su portador. y por culpa de ella sufrio años pensando que no tenia Quirk. en mi opinion fue un fracaso. le fallo en ser la heroina para el.

Did you retcon Nana's Quirk back to being 'Float'? I believe you mentioned that it's super strength early on.

I'm surprised Nezu didn't pull the 'it's your own fault' card. Not even once.