|Reviews for Nobody's Girl|
| heavenlyhell0987 chapter 15 . 12/29/2013
| heavenlyhell0987 chapter 7 . 12/29/2013
Not offensive at all. You gave the readers a fair warning with the word slavery. Lol, love your story...that you wrote a decade ago...and your probably not reading this...
| Thea chapter 15 . 12/22/2013
This is just one of the greatest stories, ever.
| Christina chapter 15 . 8/9/2013
Loved your story I would love to write a eider based on this world. I am a lemon crazed lady, so with your permission I would like to fill in the scenes in my own twisted mind and submit them to you. LOVE THIS STORY!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
If this new society uses Muggleborns to act as slaves and do menial and laborious work, they are acknowledging that there is still a place for them in their new supreme race dominated society. They are nobodies, inferior, and underlings but there is still demand for their services and work that they must complete which makes them a necessary ' convenience' to run the new world they live in. Thus, it doesn't really make sense that they are not allowed to breed at least amongst themselves, this way creating more people that will be able to carry on doing the work they are and contributing to society; in ancient civilisations sometimes slaves were not permitted to reproduce at all, but this is because these slaves were mostly just snatched peasants or 'spoils of war' there was a theoretically inexhaustible supply. But it doesn't make sense that the pure bloods have integrated these people into there society, made a demand for them, and are planning to get rid of them completely in little time; no half blood or pure blood would afterwards want to do any of that work, knowing that they now occupy a job that was once done by supposedly sub-humans, it degrades them. So I think that the only way it makes sense is if the slaves were allowed to reproduce amongst themselves, purely for necessary purposes, otherwise who will fill that place in society? Who will do their work? Who would put themselves in that place after what has happened?
| LemonsYSmutch chapter 15 . 12/16/2012
that was great.
| LemonsYSmutch chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
| Mwagner11 chapter 15 . 12/3/2012
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/5/2012
that was awesome .seriously.r u going to continue.i'm not th ehappily ever after type but...come on.
i'd be really glad.:)
| Guest chapter 15 . 7/14/2012
Awww I liked the ending so romantic I think I'm going to cry. * tear*
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/14/2012
The speed was a little too fast.
| Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 2 . 5/2/2012
New form of slaverly that I've read on a HP fanfic.
| millieluvu chapter 2 . 3/21/2012
i dont get it sudnt they already know each other?
| jowilleatyuh chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
*facepalm* why is everything in bold? ._.
| bookworm1519 chapter 15 . 11/5/2011
I really loved this can't wait for the rest of them ;) x