Reviews for The Mouri Detective Boys
Loretana1 chapter 20 . 1/20
cute * .*
Loretana1 chapter 19 . 1/7
cute Mitsuhiko

can you make more stories on Mitsuhiko ?

please ?

he is my favorite character

there are so few stories about him
maybe you can make 1 story that Mitsuhiko
travel in time * -* and it ends in the past
T.W.Kidd chapter 19 . 11/14/2017
Hi! This story is on a little bit of a hiatus for the rest of November while I complete NaNoWriMo and endure the holidays. I'm so glad everyone had enjoyed it and there will be more to come as soon as possible. ;-)
James Birdsong chapter 19 . 11/8/2017
Good fifteen chapters
KaiShinQueen chapter 19 . 11/6/2017
Your writing is flawless and the story quite engaging. Very interesting plot :) I loved how they grew up, sounds canon enough. Kudos to you :) waiting for the next developments.
guest chapter 11 . 10/23/2017
the last chapter with the memories about the young detective boys was so sweet!
but now i'm curious what happened to ai.
oh, and i liked how shinichi was involved at the end of the case, with ayumi calling out of prison and everything.
very dramatic!

-"I don't think I'm a good man," He said "I ain't sure of much but that seems clear. But even a bad man knows what love feels like."-
very dramatic indeed.*smiles*
guest chapter 8 . 10/20/2017
my,my! how very confusing.
everything's happening at once and i confess i haven't got a clue.
but that's what makes it worth reading! i love it.
and the only one surely not to be the culprit is ayumi. i hope...
*thinks about evil ayumi*
the world is doomed...
Velgamidragon chapter 4 . 10/18/2017
Say, you've covered all of the Detective Boys except one. What happened to Haibara?
guest chapter 7 . 10/18/2017
things are getting complicated!
i admit i have no idea what exactly is going on with the case, but i love reading about it.
and ayumi potentialy in prison is of course unacceptable for everybody.
Loretana1 chapter 6 . 10/11/2017
cute :)
guest chapter 6 . 10/10/2017
looks like things are turning interesting!
it's really exciting to have the case slowly laid out, and seeing the "mouri detective boys" work with the clues.
is it me or is shinichi acting like a grumpy kogoro?
guest chapter 4 . 10/4/2017
i'm interested to know how the case will work out.
and the detective boys are just too cute.
i love the plot!

i noticed two writing mistakes,you wrote
'Mitentei Kudo' doesn't think he needs the help.'
you meant 'meitantei', right? and
"As always, the brain is out voted by the braun…"
and there it should have been "by the brawn"
James Birdsong chapter 4 . 10/4/2017
Oh these two chapters are good as well.
Loretana1 chapter 4 . 10/4/2017
Loretana1 chapter 3 . 10/1/2017

i love Mitsuhiko
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