Reviews for Hail Friendship! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() For the first time, a story made me cry. I cried. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I NEED MOREEE |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() 2 points first. I like the pacing when it comes to romance, to many stories are ruined because they try to push things to fast. Second. Is Eri going to be a replacement for Recovery Girl. Because the old woman is getting on in years. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was smiling pretty much that entire chapter. My Quirk would be gravity manipulation (like Graviton from marvel). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Our girl: Other girls WILL find you cute. Shoto: You have NOTHING to be worried about. Me: I love when characters are having 2 different conversation while talking at each other. |
![]() ![]() I read two chapters and I can honestly say I didn't like it. Why make her a witch and then nerf all of her powers except apparition that she shouldn't be able to do until in high school? What's with the blob thingies? They make no sense and are not magical at all. You could have just made her a teleporter and she would be the same character, just without all the extra explanation crap. You even forgot to have her call the old magi and talk to him like the MC was supposed to when she was 14. The worst part is that you've inserted someone with previous knowledge, made them forget that knowledge, and then copied canon like an idiot. Despite having the MC meet and know the canon characters, you've changed nothing about the story. Bitchkugo is still an asshole, Idiotzuku is still a wimp and hurts himself with his quirk, and you kept the same canon events. There was no point at all in introducing the MC to the story, because it didn't change one single thing. It was an exercise in futility. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You betrayed Sato. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am absolutely in live with this story. I've been in a bit of a dip with school and work and just life in general but this story really helped me feel better. Thank you so much for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do not like how long it's been since the last update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() another FOC (pity, seeing as we’re quite lacking in the male or other gender variants of oc-insert fics in MHA) but the quality is great! :D def interesting plot |
![]() ![]() Sparrows fly north in the winter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() of that's a stupid fucking quirk. I'm out |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG I've fallen in love with almost all your stories, it's just one good one after another please keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() to think the person who made rotted woman made such a bad fic is shocking |