|Reviews for Chances|
| luisAM21 chapter 15 . 2/5
Lets hope that they don’t run into Broly
| SeeASweetSmile chapter 30 . 12/3/2019
It was such a good story ! The development was really good and in-chara ! I loved the fact that Videl was under Krillin's supervision training ! And the fact she's around the world to search dragon balls with Gohan !
| Guest chapter 20 . 9/9/2019
Chapter 20 is my favorite! Krillen confronting Hercule is soo satisfying. I agree Krillen calm makes him more menacing but I think you are wrong in saying it makes him "villainous".
| zfj chapter 30 . 5/29/2019
Okay okay. I finally finished it. Loved it. Great family friendly story of Gohan and Videl getting together. I totally forgot about this story and I’m glad I reread it/finished it!
| zfj chapter 23 . 5/28/2019
Oooh, I have already read this one! I forgot lol... silly me haha. Well, second time around, still great! Maybe there’s more chapters for me to catch up on!
| zfj chapter 8 . 5/28/2019
This is quite good. I’m looking forward to finishing this story but sleep calls.
You set up an interesting dynamic with Gohan and Videl so far (ch 8) with Videl meeting Goten and all. You got Goten and Trunks very much in character! Seemed a little fast but not a bad thing at all. I imagine Videl is taking in a lot of information feeling overwhelmed. Your writing is fluid and definitely in the perspective of Videl’s thoughts, which you conveyed well.
Can’t wait to finish this read. Great job.
| gwb620 chapter 30 . 3/31/2019
Amazing story from start to finish.
| dld51 chapter 30 . 12/6/2018
This was a great story. Please update soon
| johndoe86 chapter 30 . 9/19/2018
I enjoyed this. It was a nice twist on the typical Gohan/Videl story.
| illjwamh chapter 2 . 9/19/2018
It's hard to write Goten right, but you nailed him.
| SaiyanPrince541 chapter 30 . 9/18/2018
Ah such a shame it ends here, but what an awesome journey it's been, indeed. Great work with this!
| SaiyanPrince541 chapter 29 . 9/18/2018
Shame it's going to end next chapter, but it's been an awesome ride. I truly enjoyed Gohan's conversation with Hercule, brief as it was xD.
| SaiyanPrince541 chapter 28 . 9/17/2018
I wonder what evidence this guy came up with, during his investigation and whether or not he shared it with anyone.
| SaiyanPrince541 chapter 27 . 9/17/2018
Whoa, definitely a shorty this one. Wow, Videl's advice really had Goten flying, straight away. Now that is truly awesome. Yeah, this truly is an environment of crazy, but all the better.
| SaiyanPrince541 chapter 26 . 9/17/2018
Whoa, didn't expect Videl and Gohan to continue prolonging that kiss. Gotta love these mischief-mongering lityle scamps though LOL.