Reviews for Avalon:First Order
sUbSoNiCSoundwave chapter 1 . 10/3/2022
Been on the hunt for as many fics like this these past few months. And this didn't disappoint me.
ManticoreBlues chapter 1 . 9/8/2022
I Am in love with this one shot, absolutely beautiful3
Indra Cedar chapter 1 . 7/26/2022
Truly a masterpiece. thanks for this marvelous story
001Charlemagne chapter 1 . 7/15/2022
Very nice one-shot, I'm interested in what would happen if the 3 of them - Arturia, Shirou and EMIYA - get summoned in Chaldea(Of this fic) in the future. Too bad it probably won't happen sadge
hermitfan chapter 1 . 6/15/2022
It was a good story, i found it when i was searching for olga centric story's
Archangel Xireon Chaos God chapter 1 . 5/8/2022
Even as a one-shot, that was an exceptionally great chappy. I wish ud continue the fic but the way u ended it makes me happy anyway. It's earnedan instant fav and follow.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/4/2022
I know it's not super important the EMIYA in this Singularity isn't EMIYA Alter he's just blackened
Fyr RedNight chapter 1 . 9/11/2021
Beautiful and amazing story.

I absolutely loved this take on Artoria and Shirou's afterlife in Avalon being sent to help our Chaldean heroes.

Thank you so much for sharing this with us!

On a sort of unrelated note, how is it going with Man off the Moon?
Victorius 435 chapter 1 . 8/20/2021
EMIYA now is scared to death
comrade-elmo1 chapter 1 . 7/4/2021
lol Artoria was getting a little bit bored even if reunited with the one person who you love most in Avalon it IS still an eternity you will spend together...sure, no conflict is nice and all but still. HAHAHAHAHAHA Olga Marie Animusphere, 'I don't know what kind of incompetent master would evem try to barge into a fight with heroif spirits' saying that to Shirou mr, 'hero of justice' Emiya of all people. "Archers are incredibleRitsuka Fujimaru, talking about Shirou 'I am the bone of my sword' Emiya. ironically the male Ritsuka is inspired by a genderbent version of Rin who says something similar to actually sata- I mean Heroic spirit EMIYA. lol Shirou teasing Ritsuka and Mashu. "he is a reliable man who specializes in surpassing himself" Artoria says as Shirou is fighting his future self and it doesn't matter which wins he will technically 'surpass himself' so she is both correct and right. "a hero is someone who bears all the evils of the world" this is what Salter's definition of a 'hero' is, a perversion of her original ideal. the Salter fight in general is great. huh Artoria was taught by Shirou how to use Caliburn as a broken phantasm, neat. lol Romani saying Independent action is broken. EMIYA and Shirou and Mashu vs Lev is great, Olga accepts she will die but damn it she will go down kicking and screaming and fulfilling her role as a director of chaldea and defeating lev... no, demon god Flauros. haha EMIYA is just like 'what the hell did you teach Saber' to Shirou as she launches out a broken phantasm Caliburn and nearly incinerates Flauros. now both Shirou and Artoria are teasing Ritsuka and Mashu lol. this has been a good one shot. I'd certainly read more
Guest chapter 1 . 6/5/2021
Great thanks for the story pls write another one with other singularities but it really is great
lop90ful1 chapter 1 . 5/25/2021
This was a fantastic and adorable read. I agree this pairijg and this route deserves allot more attention.
I was personally afraid that Olga was gonna die, but you handed that situation beautiful, even if shirou had to be a meaniy about her being a ghost, his entrance to save her while having demon god shot in the face was epic
daliapv.perez chapter 1 . 4/1/2021
Fue excelente.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/14/2021
God I love this story. It's probably my favorite Shirou/Artoria fic to date. It's such an underused pairing, which is sad. Pretty sure there are more Shirou/Rin and Shirou/Sakura fics these days. Anyway, I'd love read another spinoff/sequel to this story someday. Maybe one that takes place in Babylonia? Although I realize that Man off the Moon is primarily your focus for what little time you have to write.

A man can dream though.
Innkeeper7 chapter 1 . 2/27/2021
Well Written
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