|Reviews for Are you so scared of me?|
| desy chapter 2 . 5/9
I really enjoyed it
| Sinthija chapter 2 . 11/2/2017
Aw... I crave more... but thanks for writing! It made me smile!
| Sinthija chapter 1 . 11/2/2017
Your first chapter is amazing. Very well written, especially for not being your first language. I look forward to reading more.
| martialartistkai chapter 2 . 10/8/2017
| anon chapter 1 . 10/1/2017
No bad looks like it could be fleshed out if you wanted to make the story longer if you wanted to.
| tsuki-llama chapter 1 . 10/1/2017
Aw, cute! A lovely bittersweet ending...
Your English was excellent; see Dear4Life's comments on the punctuation, but otherwise great job - thanks for writing!
| Dear4Life chapter 1 . 9/30/2017
As far as mistakes, just a few problems here and there with tenses. Like using have when it should had been had. Really good, especially since English is not your first language.
For your quotations, the comma should be inside the quotes and no need for the period in the quote. It is all considered one sentence. Your ! and ? are correct, just get rid of the comma after the quotation mark.
"I need you to sit up," she said.
"Just do it!" he snarled between clenched teeth.
"Just cut it off," he...
"Why are you doing this?" he asked quietly.
Hope that helps.
Keep writing more Hei Misaki Fics. :)
| MoonShadows717 chapter 1 . 9/30/2017
The world needs more HeixMisaki stories.
| Rin-Rin chapter 1 . 9/28/2017
Absolutely AMAZING! Please please please please please please write more :)