Reviews for Shattered (Rewrite)
TNO chapter 2 . 2/27/2023
Finally a fic that doesn't show Tabris as some musical saint, but as somebody with his own agenda. I'm not sold on Kozo. Nothing else bothered him previously, he was fine with being accomplice to Third Impact. I don't see why something would change him now.
keckleman chapter 5 . 10/20/2020
Faintly
I'll go
To take this
Head on
Soon I'll come around
Lost and never found
Waiting for my words
Seen but never heard
Buried underground
But I'll keep coming
Wipe those
Tears off
And make your
Heart proud
Soon I'll come around
Lost and never found
Waiting for my words
Seen but never heard
Buried underground
But I'll keep coming
But I'll keep coming
But I'll keep coming
But…
maxzmo chapter 5 . 8/26/2020
Another reason why I beleive all the best eva fic writers are being abducted by aliens.
Such a wonderfully written fic, so much emotion being conveyed in your words.
KySocceRref chapter 5 . 7/29/2020
I really wish this would be competed.
Urgazhi chapter 5 . 7/14/2020
I highly doubt that this is going to get updated but I just want to let you know that this was a fantastic read. I really liked the characterizations of Gendo. Thank you for writing it
Guest chapter 5 . 6/9/2020
I don't understand
You dont finish this
And then you make a reboot of it
Like I dont get why youd do this
Deltajoshua12 chapter 5 . 5/15/2020
I love how this was shaping up to be and now I'm wondering what will happen next plz continue if you can.
Jack the ripper chapter 5 . 10/7/2019
*murders you*
Cant move on chapter 5 . 8/23/2019
And you don't seem to understand
A shame you seemed an honest man
And all the fears you hold so dear
Will turn to whisper in your ear
And you know what they say might hurt you
And you know that it means so much
And you don't even feel a thing
I am falling
I am fading
I have lost it all
And you don't seem the lying kind
A shame that I can read your mind
And all the things that I read there
Candle lit smile that we both share
And you know I don't mean to hurt you
But you know that it means so much
And you don't even feel a thing
I am falling
I am fading
I am drowning
Help me to breathe
I am hurting
I have lost it all
I am losing
Help me to breathe
I am falling
I am fading
I am drowning
Help me to breathe
I am hurting
I have lost it all
I am losing
Help me to breathe
I am falling
I am fading
I am drowning
Help me to breathe
I am hurting
I have lost it all
I am losing
Help me to breathe
Ikarus Onesun chapter 5 . 6/5/2019
Well, look who's back... seems I'm not the only one who's come out of retirement lately. :-)

Nice little story you've given us here, Timu (not " " anymore? lol). I like how you are following the manga timeline (I tend to borrow from both the anime and manga, and sometimes the two are hard to square up), and the characterization is very well detailed, especially your treatment of Rei who is more open to emotional displays than her counterpart in the anime. I like the dynamic you have created between the three Children, it all feels right to me.

Great job and I'm happy to see you're still around. If you ever feel like sending anything to your old prereader for review, I'd be happy to oblige. Keep up the excellent writing!

Cheers,
IO
Guest chapter 5 . 2/24/2019
Same. : )
Velshard chapter 5 . 2/3/2019
So far I'm rather impressed with what you've done, looking forward to your future updates.
Guest chapter 5 . 11/8/2018
ggggggggggggggggggggggg
Guest chapter 5 . 10/24/2018
...
Daddy Mack chapter 5 . 9/21/2018
What'͠s͜ a͞ ͏l͠i̢t̢t̨le͞ ̴m̶eat ͘b̕e̸t͢w̵e̡en ̢th̷e f͘a̵m͞i̸l͘y?
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