great story- reread from long ago- and now off to read the sequel

Okay, first off loved this story! I just finished the whole thing! One thing I might point out, when you write the fight scenes, we don’t need the same thing repeated over and over from different perspectives. It made reading them a little hard. Other than that great story! Is there going to be a sequel? I love to see how you handle the Ann and Allen story arch, especially now that Darien has his generals around.

So I love the story. I really like the fact that Serena realized when she went back in time that she needed to better herself and her scouts to stop the events happening that she knew of and to help keep them all safer.

I do feel like she could have tried a bit more with Luna like she did Raye. Also, the Luna of this story basically remembered nothing except for the fact that the Moon Kingdom and Princess existed along with the royal family having the Silver Crystal. She knew that there was at least a scout but didn't know how many or any names which is weird.

I feel like Serena could have unlocked Luna's memory and using the crystal she could have kept certain things shrouded in Luna's memory until she was ready for her to know. This probably would have helped Luna to not feel so jealous and to see certain things more to Serena's way of thinking. It was a little callous the way Serena just took Luna's mind from her in my opinion.

I also did not like the thought she had about keeping Luna around as a regular pet so her father would know what could potentially happen to him if he interfered in her relationship. This brings me to the major objection I have with this story. I biggest thing I do not like about this story is exactly how far the relationship between Serena and Darien advanced.

They may have all their memories from the past and they were apparently older then so a more advanced relationship is not unlikely but people seem to forget that in this story Serena told Darien at the beginning of the story that she was 14. I know Darien's age in this is 17 which is not a big gap but it made me highly uncomfortable to read about a 14-year old having sex like it's not a big deal. She is essentially in middle school. Her father is supposed to protect her since she is his daughter and it's understandable he would worry about her being in such a serious relationship. He wouldn't be a good father if he didn't worry.

That said what would happen if she got pregnant while in middle school? It's a very real concern her father probably has with the relationship and one reason he is worried about his daughter being in such a serious relationship. I don't even think the age of consent is that low even in Japan so that's a factor too. Just because they remember their past and lives from 1,000 years ago it doesn't change the fact they are in the future where things have changed and certain laws are in place.

I really do love the story though so please don't think I wrote this review just to complain I just wasn't sure certain factors were as thought out since the ages weren't brought up more than once or twice and it kind of bothered me how fast they jumped into such a physical relationship. I do love the fact that Darien is getting his generals back because he had to have guards in the past and he deserves to have them back in my opinion.

And done, an excellent ending to an excellent story. Still amazing that such a small thing as Usagi remembering and getting a redo can have her turn things around so drastically.

Ohhh boy, I can definitely see the Luna situation be a strong case of 'you either love it or you hate it'. Luna had been repeatedly warned, and been given numerous chances by Usagi to listen. To the point where even Artemis gave her one last and clear warning of what was very much imminent. Luna ignored it all.

Were this closer to canon, I'd take issue with it as Luna is much more reasonable in canon even if a bit of a nag. Luna as we've seen her in this fic however had it coming. While I can understand some hate it, I can understand Usagi choosing to do as she has. Luna is in a position where she is arguably the one most likely to be a liability if the enemy manages to capture her. Thus she represents a threat even if merely dismissed, or as Usagi put it 'put on the sidelines'.

My reaction to nearly every chapter is something likeAww... Poor trees..." XD

i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i love Serena & Darien together

I liked the story well enough. However, it was very wordy and the fight scene were so descriptive that was hard to follow at times without being getting bored reading it.

I did like the fact that serena was more assertive and demanding then in the canon, with a sense of purpose. It made reading reading those parts with her and darien in it, enjoyable.

Ayy... luna is gone, ez clap.

Luna was always an annoying bitch in the canon. I know serena was ditsy or whatever, but she didn't any support at all.. and it makes sense that she had no idea what to d since she was the princess and she didn't fight back then.

Serena and darien def seem like they love each other.

Luna is so annoying, she doesn't know anything, can't help the scouts really... all she's there to do is cause problems it seems like.

Ya, serena getting help would be good. I always hated luna berating her in the canon, "oh you're lazy, act like the leader, etc". Serena is just a teenaged girl, that was thrown into this mess on luna's say so. And Darien is right, she had no training in fighting because she was the princess in the past and didn't need to do it.

I always thought, even though the 'sailor scouts' were her friends, they treated her badly.

Well.. maybe serena will actually take things a bit more seriously this time around?

I really love your stories, you really have a big talent I hope to read new stories and I hope you'll finish soon your unfinished ones.