Reviews for Moments
Hell Berry chapter 1 . 9/29/2017
It was a good story, I loved the interactions between draco, luna and their kids, it was simply adorable and cute (and gawd, poor draco interrupted by his son when he was in the middle of.. you know what I mean lol).

I just wanted you to know that there were some misspellings and grammar errors here and there (I could still understand what you were trying to say so I guess it was no problem to me). Ehh well, you did a good job! Thank you for writing and sharing it! ciao~
dmll8791 chapter 1 . 9/28/2017
I love this, it is very sweet and cute, and well written and neat. It's hilarious as I imagine Lorcan trying to sit on Scorpius's face, it's not polite but very funny. I bet Lorcan will laugh happily as he manages to sit on Scorpius's face with a full diaper. Well done :))