Christian made a monumental mistake not listening to Ana and giving her a chance to explain!

Poor Ana and poor Christian, such a heart break!

He should show her the note. Ana will recognize the handwriting !

I wonder how long it will take Christian to notice how much Fee looks like Ana!

I think that Ana will finally figure this out!

Absolutely need to talk

She is gonna get her heart broken so bad

Loved it when he was driving the car and parked to take a walk in the movie! The Week End is my favorite singer!

When are they going to figure this out?

Come on Ana sit down and tell him why you left and didn’t call him!

Well what do you expect after you just take off with no explanation!

I hope she meets his baby girl!

They will meet again ,only this time they might get to know each other!

I just LOVED your story...wonderful...! I absolutely loved this Christian Grey...and Anastasia...I thought Ray was a JERK to Christian when CG asked for his blessing to marry Ana...He let his own anger and feeling over shadow Ana's wishes...which questions the character of Ray...I know Ray loved Ana and wanted to protect her...but Ana was an adult woman ...I am so glad that Christian called Elliot who was fucking pissed at Ray and couldn't believe the audacity of the man and told Christian to go get his girl...and to fuck with Ray Steele...I am so glad you had Christian immediately getting the Cartier diamond ring out of his safe and running upstairs to Ana and waking her up and asking her to marry him...thrilled that Ana said YES...I LOVED THE RELATIONSHIP THAT CHRISTIAN HAD WITH PHOEBE...IT WAS ABSOLUTE DESTINY THAT THE THREE OF THEM CHRISTIAN, PHOEBE AND ANA MEET...THAT EVIL CARLA...I LOVED THAT CHRISTIAN USED THE LINE FROM FSFREE...WHEN ANA SAID IT TO ELENA...CHRISTIAN SAID OF CARLA THAT HE HOPE THAT CARLA WAS ROTTING IN THE SEVENTH CIRCLE OF HELL...I BELIEVE THAT IS WHERE HER CHARACTER IS ALONG WITH ELENA LINCOLN AND JACK HYDE...I LIKED KATE'S CHARACTER IN THIS STORY...WHICH IS UNUSUAL...I ALWAYS HATE THE BITCH...BUT SHE WAS ANA'S SINCERE FRIEND...I HATED ETHAN FUCKING KAVANAGH...THE THINGS HE SAID TO CHRISTIAN IN LA TO MAKE HIM DOUBT HIMSELF. AND ANA'S LOVE FOR HIM ESPECIALLY AT SUCH A FRAGILE TIME IN THEIR REUNION...TELLING CHRISTIAN THAT HE (ETHAN) TOOK HER VIRGINITY..AND TOLD CHRISTIAN THAT THE ONLY REASON THAT ANA WAS WITH CG WAS THAT SHE WAS AFRAID THAT CG WOULD TAKE PHOEBE AWAY FROM HER...OF COURSE CHRISTIAN'S FRAGILE EGO TOOK ANOTHER HIT...
I LOVED THE ENDING ABOUT CHRISTIAN DELIVERING TEDDY...AND THE EPILOGUE OF PHOEBE FINDING OUT ABOUT HER BIRTH FATHER...AND THAT CAME ABOUT FROM THE BITCH CARLA AS WELL...GIVING THAT FUCKING LAWYER THE LETTER ABOUT THOMAS BEING HER FATHER...STILL MANIPULATING AND DOING EVIL EVEN FROM THE GRAVE AND THE 7TH CIRCLE OF HELL...HOW HURT PHOEBE WAS LEARNING ABOUT HER BIO FATHER...AND HOW CHRISTIAN WENT WITH HER TO LA TO THE CARE FACILITY SO PHOEBE COULD HAVE THE CLOSURE THAT WE WANTED...I ABSOLUTELY BAWLED MY EYES OUT AT THE END OF THE EPILOGUE OF PHOEBE AND CHRISTIAN TALKING AND PHOEBE TELLING CHRISTIAN THAT HE WOULD ALWAYS BE HER DADDY NO MATTER WHAT...AND THAT SHE LOVED HIM TO THE MOON AND BACK!WONDERFUL WONDERFUL WONDERFUL STORY...I LOVED IT...I STARTED READING IT AND THEN STOPPED WHEN CHRISTIAN THREW ANA OUT OF HIS HOUSE. ...I HATED THAT PART BUT CAME BACK AND HAD TO FINISH IT BECAUSE I KNEW THAT ANA AND CHRISTIAN WERE DESTINED TO BE TOGETHER SO HAD TO FIND OUT HOW THEY GOT BACK TOGETHER..WISH THERE WAS MORE TO THIS STORY...BUT THIS WAS A GOOD ENDING NEVER THE LESS...YOU ARE A VERY GOOD WRITER...HOPE YOU WRITE MORE FIFTY SHADES FANFICTION STORIES...

I love this chapter...crying my eyes out! Love it!