Reviews for Abaddon Born(e) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry for just now reviewing this, but I had to read your story first :) This is great, thank you for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rather interesting chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really good chapter. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...if you've ever read This Bites you'll get why I say this, but Lee reminds me of Cross in that he tends to bludgeon those who need it with logic without the caveat of using that logic to troll people. |
![]() ![]() ![]() scratch that. I figured it out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That he is. And we love him for it. Thanks for the whapter, keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I...am confused. Is the main character a guy or a girl? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice I rather like the training that her is putting Vicky though and how it shows how he trained at times to them. It is rather fun though I think his costume's fabric freaked out the poor tailor. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHA! Can't wait for more, honestly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And that's ABB arc over. What's next on the agenda? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story. I really like how you are stretching things out so that it is a good read with plenty of time for the development of characters as well as the changing of plots so far. I wonder how recruitment will go and if that kid that triggered earlier in this storyline will end up joining the PD. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Huh, Piggot seemed surprisingly rational relative to how incompetent you've been portraying the PRT, and the level of animosity Vejovis seems to have towards them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice, great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn son. Can't wait for more. I love it! |