Okay chapter.

I am frikng loving this story. I only picked it up today and have just blazed through it. Can't wait for more.

Okay chapter.

Not bad.

Coool updat

But i think they over did the hurt of Armsmaster
unless they Want the PRT comeing down on them

i tink they shood of nock him out then call the PRT the cops the TV new

PLEASE tell me they're gonna post the audio to PHO and play it for the media BEFORE the protectorate has a chance to spin things. (Though I guess they'd have to edit it to remove the Taylor and Emma references, or just leave out their end of the convo.)

So evil! How could you end the chapter there?! I'm literally salivating to find out how this PR disaster will play out and how pissed Armsmaster will be that all his tech was destroyed.

Nice updat

This is a joy to read.

great beginning

Thanks for the update and Happy Thanksgiving to you

I liked this story I really did but you have your guys doing things that absolutely make no sense and are just plain pointless and are breaking all the rules that will have villains and heroes going after them

Pterodons and pteradactyls are flying dinosaurs.

I myself am confused, so I can only guess at how poor Taylor is feeling.

What a maddeningly frustrating chapter. I'm assuming you did it on purpose, so good job capturing the inability of most people to express their ideas in a cogent and coherent manner. That said it is not always an easy thing to do, especially on the spot. Due to this it was a very 'realistic' chapter in some respects. Good job, I'm looking forward to the next one.