Reviews for Abaddon Born(e) |
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Freed-sama chapter 13 . 11/8/2017 Such a shame you didnt get Panacea's thinker power. Looking forward to the registration scene |
jdboss1 chapter 12 . 11/7/2017 coool |
Guest chapter 11 . 11/2/2017 Love what you’ve done. The characters here act like humans instead of munchkin robots in human skin compared to what other authors have done with CYOA stories. I hope you continue this work as it deserves to have a good ending. Can’t wait for the next chapter! |
jdboss1 chapter 11 . 11/3/2017 wish more happy here then just chating still coool |
Freed-sama chapter 11 . 11/2/2017 Thanks for the chapter! |
exillion chapter 1 . 11/1/2017 oh great, another shitty SI. Because we want more self-fullfilment wankers with overpowered abilities. |
johnworm chapter 9 . 10/31/2017 Great start, looking forward to reading more! If anyone was interested, this is the build using details listed as of ch10 MC / ? Rycroft Gestation 15CP 15 SP Path: Hero [2 free followers] Team: Other -3CP Perk: Companionship [followers can be another path] Entry: Drop-in 3CP, 3SP Identity: No Identity 2CP Costume: Dimensional cloak -4CP Foreign Element (Abaddon Shard) -3CP -3SP - Powers are far more potent than described and grow beyond that - Shard gives instinctual knowledge on how to use them and aid you when incapacitated - Enough power to last centuries Gift: Plot Relevance Identity sub-total: 10CP, 15SP Martial Arts [Previously known] Parkour -2CP Stealth -3CP ? -3CP (hasn’t been mentioned in-story yet) Skills sub-total: -5CP Plot Convenience -1CP Blindspot -3CP, -4SP Second Trigger -4CP, -3SP [USW] Power Slot -1SP Noctis Cape -1CP Negentropy -5CP, -5SP Cauldron Vials -2CP [Union: minion master with super high survivability] Cauldron Vials -2CP [Overwatch] Perks sub-total: -18CP, -13SP Rough Start lvl2 4CP [homeless, bit of debt] Worst Day Ever lvl2 4CP, 2SP [ world out to kill you] Case 53 lvl1 1SP [prismatic irisis] Endbringer Target 3CP, 4SP Slaughterhouse 9 4CP, 2SP Drawbacks sub-total: 16CP, 8SP Peak Condition -1SP Immunity -1SP Immune to temperature and heat, acid, and can’t get sick or poisoned Power Sight -1SP Unlimited Shard Works -7SP (second trigger) Powers sub-total: -10SP Copied Powers: Skidmark (Speed Zones) Stormtiger (Aerokinesis) Cricket (Acoustokinesis) Shadow Stalker (Shadow State) - Herb Gestation 15CP 15 SP Path: Conspirator [Vials are second triggers] Entry: Drop-in 3CP, 3SP Identity: No Identity 2CP Costume: Robot-suit combo -4CP Foreign Element (Abaddon Shard) -3CP -3SP - Powers are far more potent than described and grow beyond that - Shard gives instinctual knowledge on how to use them and aid you when incapacitated - Enough power to last centuries Identity sub-total: 13CP, 15SP Martial Arts -4CP Parkour -2CP Stealth -3CP Skills sub-total: -9CP Plot Convenience -1CP Secret Lair -2CP Cauldron Vials -2CP [second trigger: Storm] Cauldron Vials -2CP [second trigger: Lee] Cauldron Vials -2CP [second trigger: Cable] Second Trigger -4CP, -3SP [Stand] Power Slot -1SP Perks sub-total: -13CP, -4SP Rough Start lvl3 6CP [in debt, homeless, social outcast] Worst Day Ever lvl2 4CP, 2SP [ world out to kill you] Case 53 lvl1 1SP [vampire teeth] Endbringer Target 3CP, 4SP Slaughterhouse 9 4CP, 2SP Drawbacks: 17CP, 9SP Copycat -2SP Perfect copy of a power of a parahuman within 5m Peak Condition -1SP Body operates at max of human condition As strong/fast/agile as professional athletes without need to maintain through training Stand -7SP Animorph -5: Can transform into any animal larger than microbe Vampirism -2: regenerate based on dmg done, get stronger and faster longer you fight Jump -1: Jump 100m, no fall damage, double jumps Immunity -1: poisons, acid, cold, heat, radiation, electricity Fake Death -1: everyone thinks you’re dead until they see proof otherwise Replication -10 Powers sub-total: -20SP 8CP remaining He might have chosen more Skills or some Cauldron Perks - MC’s Father / Jack Rycroft Medhu Patel / “The Neutral Party” Gestation 15CP 15 SP Path: Rogue [free identity] Job: ? (It’s really more of a Service, but that doesn’t fit) Perks: Thriving Business -3CP (MaHotma Grindy) Entry: Insert Male Adult (26yrs old) Identity: CEO [free] Costume: Foreign Element (Abaddon Shard) -3CP -3SP - Powers are far more potent than described and grow beyond that - Shard gives instinctual knowledge on how to use them and aid you when incapacitated - Enough power to last centuries Identity sub-total: 9CP, 12SP Plot Convenience -1CP Blindspot -3CP, -4SP Second Trigger -4CP, -3SP [Stand] Cauldron Vials -2CP [Healer] Perks sub-total: -10CP, -7SP Endbringer Target 3CP, 4SP Drawback sub-total: 3CP, 4SP Recordless -2SP Trance -2SP Destiny Weaver -7SP (second trigger) Powers sub-total: -11SP 2CP remaining, 2SP missing |
Freed-sama chapter 10 . 10/30/2017 genre savvy eh? Lets see how far they're willing to go. |
jdboss1 chapter 9 . 10/28/2017 HAHAHA i love this updat good job |
Freed-sama chapter 9 . 10/26/2017 Hooo, interesting! I'm curious as to the developments this will lead to. It definitely provides a solid solid set of resources and powerful thinkerstranger support for our wayward hero's. |
DareusX chapter 9 . 10/26/2017 You got my attention, now keep 'em coming |
jdboss1 chapter 8 . 10/23/2017 Nice updat |
Freed-sama chapter 8 . 10/22/2017 1! |
jdboss1 chapter 7 . 10/19/2017 I'm surprised how much I enjoyed this story, I was hesitant at first, but seeing the way you wrote the interactive between the natural all your different personalities of all the characters came across brilliantly I am very surprised you just had 7 reviews I am pleased they didn't start at the beginning of the story At this point is hardly a group they have not offended , Please can you do point of view of the PRT ) |
Freed-sama chapter 7 . 10/18/2017 lol. funny as this has been, i'm looking forward to this day finally being over. |