Reviews for Abaddon Born(e)
Freed-sama chapter 13 . 11/8/2017
Such a shame you didnt get Panacea's thinker power. Looking forward to the registration scene
jdboss1 chapter 12 . 11/7/2017
coool
Guest chapter 11 . 11/2/2017
Love what you’ve done. The characters here act like humans instead of munchkin robots in human skin compared to what other authors have done with CYOA stories. I hope you continue this work as it deserves to have a good ending. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
jdboss1 chapter 11 . 11/3/2017
wish more happy here then just chating

still coool
Freed-sama chapter 11 . 11/2/2017
Thanks for the chapter!
exillion chapter 1 . 11/1/2017
oh great, another shitty SI. Because we want more self-fullfilment wankers with overpowered abilities.
johnworm chapter 9 . 10/31/2017
Great start, looking forward to reading more!

If anyone was interested, this is the build using details listed as of ch10

MC / ? Rycroft

Gestation 15CP 15 SP
Path: Hero [2 free followers]
Team: Other -3CP
Perk: Companionship [followers can be another path]
Entry: Drop-in 3CP, 3SP
Identity: No Identity 2CP
Costume: Dimensional cloak -4CP
Foreign Element (Abaddon Shard) -3CP -3SP
- Powers are far more potent than described and grow beyond that
- Shard gives instinctual knowledge on how to use them and aid you when incapacitated
- Enough power to last centuries
Gift: Plot Relevance
Identity sub-total: 10CP, 15SP

Martial Arts [Previously known]
Parkour -2CP
Stealth -3CP
? -3CP (hasn’t been mentioned in-story yet)
Skills sub-total: -5CP

Plot Convenience -1CP
Blindspot -3CP, -4SP
Second Trigger -4CP, -3SP [USW]
Power Slot -1SP
Noctis Cape -1CP
Negentropy -5CP, -5SP
Cauldron Vials -2CP [Union: minion master with super high survivability]
Cauldron Vials -2CP [Overwatch]
Perks sub-total: -18CP, -13SP

Rough Start lvl2 4CP [homeless, bit of debt]
Worst Day Ever lvl2 4CP, 2SP [ world out to kill you]
Case 53 lvl1 1SP [prismatic irisis]
Endbringer Target 3CP, 4SP
Slaughterhouse 9 4CP, 2SP
Drawbacks sub-total: 16CP, 8SP

Peak Condition -1SP
Immunity -1SP
Immune to temperature and heat, acid, and can’t get sick or poisoned
Power Sight -1SP
Unlimited Shard Works -7SP (second trigger)
Powers sub-total: -10SP

Copied Powers:
Skidmark (Speed Zones)
Stormtiger (Aerokinesis)
Cricket (Acoustokinesis)
Shadow Stalker (Shadow State)

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Herb

Gestation 15CP 15 SP
Path: Conspirator [Vials are second triggers]
Entry: Drop-in 3CP, 3SP
Identity: No Identity 2CP
Costume: Robot-suit combo -4CP
Foreign Element (Abaddon Shard) -3CP -3SP
- Powers are far more potent than described and grow beyond that
- Shard gives instinctual knowledge on how to use them and aid you when incapacitated
- Enough power to last centuries
Identity sub-total: 13CP, 15SP

Martial Arts -4CP
Parkour -2CP
Stealth -3CP
Skills sub-total: -9CP

Plot Convenience -1CP
Secret Lair -2CP
Cauldron Vials -2CP [second trigger: Storm]
Cauldron Vials -2CP [second trigger: Lee]
Cauldron Vials -2CP [second trigger: Cable]
Second Trigger -4CP, -3SP [Stand]
Power Slot -1SP
Perks sub-total: -13CP, -4SP

Rough Start lvl3 6CP [in debt, homeless, social outcast]
Worst Day Ever lvl2 4CP, 2SP [ world out to kill you]
Case 53 lvl1 1SP [vampire teeth]
Endbringer Target 3CP, 4SP
Slaughterhouse 9 4CP, 2SP
Drawbacks: 17CP, 9SP

Copycat -2SP
Perfect copy of a power of a parahuman within 5m
Peak Condition -1SP
Body operates at max of human condition
As strong/fast/agile as professional athletes without need to maintain through training
Stand -7SP
Animorph -5: Can transform into any animal larger than microbe
Vampirism -2: regenerate based on dmg done, get stronger and faster longer you fight
Jump -1: Jump 100m, no fall damage, double jumps
Immunity -1: poisons, acid, cold, heat, radiation, electricity
Fake Death -1: everyone thinks you’re dead until they see proof otherwise
Replication -10
Powers sub-total: -20SP

8CP remaining
He might have chosen more Skills or some Cauldron Perks
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MC’s Father / Jack Rycroft
Medhu Patel / “The Neutral Party”

Gestation 15CP 15 SP
Path: Rogue [free identity]
Job: ? (It’s really more of a Service, but that doesn’t fit)
Perks: Thriving Business -3CP (MaHotma Grindy)
Entry: Insert Male Adult (26yrs old)
Identity: CEO [free]
Costume:
Foreign Element (Abaddon Shard) -3CP -3SP
- Powers are far more potent than described and grow beyond that
- Shard gives instinctual knowledge on how to use them and aid you when incapacitated
- Enough power to last centuries
Identity sub-total: 9CP, 12SP

Plot Convenience -1CP
Blindspot -3CP, -4SP
Second Trigger -4CP, -3SP [Stand]
Cauldron Vials -2CP [Healer]
Perks sub-total: -10CP, -7SP

Endbringer Target 3CP, 4SP
Drawback sub-total: 3CP, 4SP

Recordless -2SP
Trance -2SP
Destiny Weaver -7SP (second trigger)
Powers sub-total: -11SP

2CP remaining, 2SP missing
Freed-sama chapter 10 . 10/30/2017
genre savvy eh? Lets see how far they're willing to go.
jdboss1 chapter 9 . 10/28/2017
HAHAHA

i love this updat
good job
Freed-sama chapter 9 . 10/26/2017
Hooo, interesting! I'm curious as to the developments this will lead to. It definitely provides a solid solid set of resources and powerful thinkerstranger support for our wayward hero's.
DareusX chapter 9 . 10/26/2017
You got my attention, now keep 'em coming
jdboss1 chapter 8 . 10/23/2017
Nice updat
Freed-sama chapter 8 . 10/22/2017
1!
jdboss1 chapter 7 . 10/19/2017
I'm surprised how much I enjoyed this story, I was hesitant at first, but seeing the way you wrote the interactive between the natural
all your different personalities of all the characters came across brilliantly

I am very surprised you just had 7 reviews

I am pleased they didn't start at the beginning of the story

At this point is hardly a group they have not offended ,

Please can you do point of view of the PRT )
Freed-sama chapter 7 . 10/18/2017
lol. funny as this has been, i'm looking forward to this day finally being over.
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