I think you should your fanfic description from "SI" to "Self insert(SI)", it's gonna grab attention to people who search self insert novel by typing "Self Insert" in the search engine instead of just "SI".

Entertaining conversation between the two of you, really liking this development and character setting.
Looking forward to your next chapter.

You have to far, to me, done an excellent job with how you have started this piece of fiction. It is incredilby hard for a writer to utilise a worm cyoa effectively, especially when self inserts are included. Your interactions with both of your protagonists and other characters is both hilarious and interesting. The banter is fun and I quite enjoy it. And generally i find your main characters both enjoyabke and funny.

I am looking forward to more chapters and hope that you continue with this story.

Love the new chapter. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to see how they handle realizing that the date is April 8th and Taylor already triggered back in january.

Dude. Yes. Take my yes.

Holy cow this is good. For a CYOA self-insert fan fiction it's surprisingly well done. Characters are believable and are more 'human' than usual. The powers they have are useful in the long game especially since their very presence fucks up the current end-game for how canon ended the story.

Do note that it could be a little weird for them to talk about this stuff while the guy by the gate is nearby.