Reviews for Abaddon Born(e)
0vrLrd71 chapter 135 . 12/6/2020
Holy fuck
0vrLrd71 chapter 134 . 12/6/2020
Brian? I'm guessing because of the eyes mentioned and what happened in that other interlude, though I really, really hope Aish didnt actually pass, but if so oh well

Wow, so he is thinking everyone as his sister? that's... sad man, and the fact that he knows it isn't her... wow

Oh god, PPP(R) that got me laughin'

hopefully joe survives he seems like a 'decent fella'

Oh god that's a big innuendo isn't it? he is either shameless or is good at hiding it

Holy fuck you actually used PPP? I just did it earlier because I didn't want to write and well... calling someone that, that its a guy, just...

now that I think about it Narwhal is a weaker version of that forcefield dragon lady from Legendary Mechanic (I think it was from that novel)

oh damn, Rest in Peace Joe, May the Lord be with you (My bad I don't really know how to do this, last time I officially went to church I was like 6)

Hopefully he isn't dead but...
0vrLrd71 chapter 133 . 12/6/2020
Damn, I'm guessing he'll miss copying actual useful (like Flechetts and those types) powers since he passed out? eh I guess you can't really give him everything even if this situation , of course everything I'm saying is me assuming stuff lol
0vrLrd71 chapter 132 . 12/6/2020
going- hoping (I missed the O and it corrected to going lmaofor my last chapters review )

Heh, those two maybe? Althea seems decent, though what about the girls he gave his vials to? I want to doubt it but the best way to ensure their loyalty is to...
0vrLrd71 chapter 131 . 12/6/2020
... I actually was going that she... well hopefully jess really isn't dead
0vrLrd71 chapter 129 . 12/5/2020
Honestly just highlighting the glitch text made it readable though I had to go to SB however since it was easy to lose where you left if you space out or something I had to... unglitch it lol

though that's for this chapter

Bruh, it was at the end!? Dammit

also, that's like a... fuck moment instead of half the city having to be rebuilt it'll be most of it...
0vrLrd71 chapter 128 . 12/5/2020
Hopefully it just means he is missing another piece and that's why he can't use those powers... hopefully he copies a power and Hopefully that has the missing piece and he can finally use those powers

"Wait whups"? lmao

"two ho-people" what did he mean originally? hosts? hotties(doubt it)?

Fuck... really? a nerf with a hidden power up? that's... low bro

or maybe I jumped to conclusions and his powers are still adapting?

that cowboy dude, I think I got what he thought lmao

though the glass lady... yeah she is a woman so it makes sense

Bruh, their powers got stronger and they got a confidence boost of course they'll do that... that dude that said something about the longer you show the prefight stuff the chance the fight won't end up how it would have or something like that (last chapters reviewer I think)
0vrLrd71 chapter 126 . 12/5/2020
oh god, the implications of Rune... I knew it was a mistake to let her stay there

honestly I'm starting to not like any versions of Herb, and holy fuck, there will be more...

It would have been alright if he was far younger or maybe after goldmorning (barely if not at all) but whatever
0vrLrd71 chapter 125 . 12/5/2020
True, and I really hope that during that windfall he actually gets useful powers, subtle ones preferably so he can stay say and use them in any persona but it'll be hard for that for the most part seen most people would be attacking, not him unless he gets close to them
0vrLrd71 chapter 124 . 12/5/2020
fuck, I posted a review for this chapter on Chap 117 when I was trying to remember that girls name... damn
0vrLrd71 chapter 117 . 12/5/2020
Alright, first sorry for the double post, second I reread the chapter where Lee went and met Sherrel

now that I reread it if she really turns over a new leaf and actually improves herself (which is possibly seeing that she isn't... a typical (whatever stereotype she fits right now... what am I doing?

anyways she seems like she can be a decent person, maybe more, I wouldn't mind her being something akin to what Hedera has to Herb or a less... Taylor situation? anyways yeah... lmao a lot of peps probably ain't gonna agree with my thought process right now
0vrLrd71 chapter 124 . 12/5/2020
I honestly wouldn't mind Squealer she doesn't seem bad from what this chapter shows, plus if I ever went to worm and met her before she turns into... this lady well, I'll be fine /shrugs
0vrLrd71 chapter 122 . 12/5/2020
What the hell is happening? Is Amy really doing all that? in... like 3 days? or was it Herb? Ahh idk

Haha, damn Vicky, should have known you would go all icky and yucky all that to bugs
subsonic100 chapter 206 . 12/5/2020
Nice little quick read. You know, just a fast story on the side.

Seriously though. Well done, I haven't come across many stories of 1mil words that managed to keep my attention so well.

Your main character is very powerful, but still gets caught off guard and there's still bigger baddies around to make it challenging. It's a fine line and you're walking it perfectly.

I particular enjoy the space aspect, as I had often wondered about the use of powers for space travel. Using the spike & teleportation to the moon was fun to read. Same with getting the satellite to a geosync orbit. I hope you consider continuing part of the storyline in this direction.
0vrLrd71 chapter 120 . 12/5/2020
That sucks, if he is just granting everyone peak and immunity it kinda sucks, but whatever, it's your call
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