Reviews for Abaddon Born(e)
Freed-sama chapter 14 . 11/13/2017
A bit ham fisted with the idiot ball but eh, w/e it was a fun chapter!
Star Iron chapter 14 . 11/13/2017
Man it was just getting good.
DareusX chapter 14 . 11/13/2017
Nice chapter, keep 'em coming plz
jdboss1 chapter 13 . 11/9/2017
nice updat
Guest chapter 11 . 11/7/2017
Have them go to the brockton bay central bank on April 14th he will be able to get all of the undersiders(tattletale, grue, bitch, regent, and Taylor) powers, as well as all of the wards(clockblocker, vista, aegis, browbeat, and kidwin) powers and panacea and glorygirls powers. So that means he will get darkness generation, super deduction, dog mutation, body jacking, and bug control, plus time freezing, semi adaptive and redundant biology(aegis), touch telekinesis and self biokinesis(browbeat), modularity tinker specialty, space warping, as well as super biokinesis from panacea as well as glory girls barrier love/fear aura and super strength and since several of those powers are so similar he might be able to stack them
Freed-sama chapter 13 . 11/8/2017
Such a shame you didnt get Panacea's thinker power. Looking forward to the registration scene
jdboss1 chapter 12 . 11/7/2017
coool
Guest chapter 11 . 11/2/2017
Love what you’ve done. The characters here act like humans instead of munchkin robots in human skin compared to what other authors have done with CYOA stories. I hope you continue this work as it deserves to have a good ending. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
jdboss1 chapter 11 . 11/3/2017
wish more happy here then just chating

still coool
Freed-sama chapter 11 . 11/2/2017
Thanks for the chapter!
exillion chapter 1 . 11/1/2017
oh great, another shitty SI. Because we want more self-fullfilment wankers with overpowered abilities.
johnworm chapter 9 . 10/31/2017
Great start, looking forward to reading more!

If anyone was interested, this is the build using details listed as of ch10

MC / ? Rycroft

Gestation 15CP 15 SP
Path: Hero [2 free followers]
Team: Other -3CP
Perk: Companionship [followers can be another path]
Entry: Drop-in 3CP, 3SP
Identity: No Identity 2CP
Costume: Dimensional cloak -4CP
Foreign Element (Abaddon Shard) -3CP -3SP
- Powers are far more potent than described and grow beyond that
- Shard gives instinctual knowledge on how to use them and aid you when incapacitated
- Enough power to last centuries
Gift: Plot Relevance
Identity sub-total: 10CP, 15SP

Martial Arts [Previously known]
Parkour -2CP
Stealth -3CP
? -3CP (hasn’t been mentioned in-story yet)
Skills sub-total: -5CP

Plot Convenience -1CP
Blindspot -3CP, -4SP
Second Trigger -4CP, -3SP [USW]
Power Slot -1SP
Noctis Cape -1CP
Negentropy -5CP, -5SP
Cauldron Vials -2CP [Union: minion master with super high survivability]
Cauldron Vials -2CP [Overwatch]
Perks sub-total: -18CP, -13SP

Rough Start lvl2 4CP [homeless, bit of debt]
Worst Day Ever lvl2 4CP, 2SP [ world out to kill you]
Case 53 lvl1 1SP [prismatic irisis]
Endbringer Target 3CP, 4SP
Slaughterhouse 9 4CP, 2SP
Drawbacks sub-total: 16CP, 8SP

Peak Condition -1SP
Immunity -1SP
Immune to temperature and heat, acid, and can’t get sick or poisoned
Power Sight -1SP
Unlimited Shard Works -7SP (second trigger)
Powers sub-total: -10SP

Copied Powers:
Skidmark (Speed Zones)
Stormtiger (Aerokinesis)
Cricket (Acoustokinesis)
Shadow Stalker (Shadow State)

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Herb

Gestation 15CP 15 SP
Path: Conspirator [Vials are second triggers]
Entry: Drop-in 3CP, 3SP
Identity: No Identity 2CP
Costume: Robot-suit combo -4CP
Foreign Element (Abaddon Shard) -3CP -3SP
- Powers are far more potent than described and grow beyond that
- Shard gives instinctual knowledge on how to use them and aid you when incapacitated
- Enough power to last centuries
Identity sub-total: 13CP, 15SP

Martial Arts -4CP
Parkour -2CP
Stealth -3CP
Skills sub-total: -9CP

Plot Convenience -1CP
Secret Lair -2CP
Cauldron Vials -2CP [second trigger: Storm]
Cauldron Vials -2CP [second trigger: Lee]
Cauldron Vials -2CP [second trigger: Cable]
Second Trigger -4CP, -3SP [Stand]
Power Slot -1SP
Perks sub-total: -13CP, -4SP

Rough Start lvl3 6CP [in debt, homeless, social outcast]
Worst Day Ever lvl2 4CP, 2SP [ world out to kill you]
Case 53 lvl1 1SP [vampire teeth]
Endbringer Target 3CP, 4SP
Slaughterhouse 9 4CP, 2SP
Drawbacks: 17CP, 9SP

Copycat -2SP
Perfect copy of a power of a parahuman within 5m
Peak Condition -1SP
Body operates at max of human condition
As strong/fast/agile as professional athletes without need to maintain through training
Stand -7SP
Animorph -5: Can transform into any animal larger than microbe
Vampirism -2: regenerate based on dmg done, get stronger and faster longer you fight
Jump -1: Jump 100m, no fall damage, double jumps
Immunity -1: poisons, acid, cold, heat, radiation, electricity
Fake Death -1: everyone thinks you’re dead until they see proof otherwise
Replication -10
Powers sub-total: -20SP

8CP remaining
He might have chosen more Skills or some Cauldron Perks
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MC’s Father / Jack Rycroft
Medhu Patel / “The Neutral Party”

Gestation 15CP 15 SP
Path: Rogue [free identity]
Job: ? (It’s really more of a Service, but that doesn’t fit)
Perks: Thriving Business -3CP (MaHotma Grindy)
Entry: Insert Male Adult (26yrs old)
Identity: CEO [free]
Costume:
Foreign Element (Abaddon Shard) -3CP -3SP
- Powers are far more potent than described and grow beyond that
- Shard gives instinctual knowledge on how to use them and aid you when incapacitated
- Enough power to last centuries
Identity sub-total: 9CP, 12SP

Plot Convenience -1CP
Blindspot -3CP, -4SP
Second Trigger -4CP, -3SP [Stand]
Cauldron Vials -2CP [Healer]
Perks sub-total: -10CP, -7SP

Endbringer Target 3CP, 4SP
Drawback sub-total: 3CP, 4SP

Recordless -2SP
Trance -2SP
Destiny Weaver -7SP (second trigger)
Powers sub-total: -11SP

2CP remaining, 2SP missing
Freed-sama chapter 10 . 10/30/2017
genre savvy eh? Lets see how far they're willing to go.
jdboss1 chapter 9 . 10/28/2017
HAHAHA

i love this updat
good job
Freed-sama chapter 9 . 10/26/2017
Hooo, interesting! I'm curious as to the developments this will lead to. It definitely provides a solid solid set of resources and powerful thinkerstranger support for our wayward hero's.
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