Reviews for Children of War
Uberch01 chapter 3 . 10/12/2017
A preety well dipicted battle, good job
Emperor Palps chapter 3 . 10/12/2017
Think u depicted thus really well,
Natzo chapter 3 . 10/12/2017
I would expect them to self-destruct the station as soon as the turians boarded to taken them with them and deny them their price. Of course I hope they get nothing and actually get punished for an attack on a new species.
Tank2552 chapter 2 . 10/12/2017
Jeffpenn chapter 2 . 10/9/2017
Really good! Please continue!
Darkcush chapter 1 . 10/7/2017
Love the set up so far.
Kakabra chapter 2 . 10/6/2017
great story so far but the general is too negative and defeatist.
Tom712 chapter 2 . 10/5/2017
*finger guns* You are pretty good.
ursu.sabin chapter 2 . 10/3/2017
Pretty decent so far, i like your characterization of the turian commander.

However i doubt that a militarized species with a history of fighting the rachni would have only 4 frigates present at the opening of a new mass relay and no space force/defence over an important colony.

I get that you're looking for a ground war and having the alliance fleet coming in and kicking the turians in the teeth at the last minute or after they bombard the planet, but that's just poor writing.
Ghostboy95 chapter 2 . 10/2/2017
I like that you didn't just portray the Turians as warmongers. They are not and at the worst they are enforcing the law like an honorable Turian should. The thing that most people don't get is that the Turian Hierarchy follows the letter of the law not the spirit. I also wonder what you have imagined for the description of the capital of Shanxi. Like do they have a walled and defensive city or is it beautiful and wide spread? Do they use the tunnels in the plants crust left from when the Hive held the planet? Maybe that's where military bunkers down and hides the civilians in the event of an invasion? All in all I like this chapter and am interested in seeing more. Good writing too.
bfg10k17 chapter 1 . 10/2/2017
Humanity, F**k Yeah !
I like this so far. The Citadel won't know what hit them. lol
Patriota1993 chapter 2 . 10/1/2017
first contact war fanfic in which are thinking turian ... i am in shock - in a positive sense
Patriota1993 chapter 1 . 10/1/2017
militaristic humanity... I LOVE IT
DanielRMaxwell chapter 1 . 9/30/2017
worth reading so far , will be better able to determine how good it can be when you get the next chapter out
NightKing56 chapter 1 . 9/29/2017
This looks really good.
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