|Reviews for The Horizons Beyond|
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/3
Dude, you had the humans able to dodge lasers after they've been fired. Ships take time to move and human reaction speed just isn't quick enough to do that at 1 light second. By the time you give the command you've already been hit.
| MalSer chapter 19 . 3/12
Very interesting story, I hope you return to it someday.
| Dewiltse chapter 19 . 11/20/2021
FINNALLU CAUGHT UP. xD It may have taken me a good while to catch up due to being busy, but here I AM and I am LOVING this story. I know most of these sci did and largely on the whole I like what you are doing. One minor gripe I have is how you treat interstellar distances. Please realize the closest star system to earth is 4 light-years away. 4 light years if I remember right is what a mass effect ship can travel on its non-relay FTL in one day. So for a few chapters ago to say that it would take a USF ship something like a week to travel that seemed mind boggling to me. And yet at other points you have them moving far faster, close to the Star Trek that you based them on. But as said, that is a minor gripe I can ignore. Honestly most scifis get that wrong anyways, the Star Wars galaxy being incredibly small if you go by some of their first listed sizes. Meanwhile early on I think you game a reasonable size for our Galaxy if I remember right so nice one!
I love good world building. So thank you for that earlier on. I wouldn't mind seeing more of that if you so desire later. For not really having done a story beyond world building before I must say you are doing a good job. Especially for not being a native English speaker and mostly having few grammatical errors.
In short, you have done a fantastic job. You are handling characters well and weaving an interesting tapestry of a story here. I have my own thoughts on some beats but opinions opinions. You have done well. I look forward to the next installment of this captivating narrative. Thank you.
| chloe chapter 19 . 11/12/2021
Hope there is a new chapter soon
| Konradoziom chapter 19 . 10/29/2021
Great chapter. But what interraction willa be beetwen Citadel and B5 races?
| JollieHotDog chapter 12 . 10/4/2021
Reading your reply to the reviews just made me realize that this is not for me as i don't like this kind of human government(The way that they can be pushed around and taken advantage of by the other races as long as they're careful enough to not push them to their limits and get away with it, Pissed me off) in ff stories, The only reason i haven't drop this yet is because I thought that they would soon realize their naiveness and start putting the other races on their place but that just seems to be a pipe dream now
| Guest chapter 19 . 8/28/2021
Keep the chapters coming please and thank you.
| Emporer Bloodfire chapter 19 . 7/1/2021
hope you update. I love this fanfic
| Doombug chapter 1 . 6/19/2021
The Minbari Grey Council stop using chairs in their viewing rooms.
... I love how that is the only thing of note in a large chunk of time :P
| Hadrian.Caeser chapter 1 . 6/1/2021
I am kind of disappointed that you gave humanity those ridiculous ships. While they might look good on TV, they could have been something far greater than those death traps which are extremely dependent on advanced technology to remain intact
| dutchsoldier chapter 18 . 5/30/2021
Nevermind went back and Saw I misread something, my apologies
| dutchsoldier chapter 17 . 5/30/2021
While I like the story I would like to point something out: the method you describe for non-biological reproduction, while not the worst Idea I've seen on the subject, and possibly a good solution for same sex couples, wouldn't work as well with virtuansxhuman relations as Both would need to come from 1 individual. This would cause the same effects roughly as sibling incest, OR in other words while with it you could very well get a healthy child, it would be very risky
| Guest chapter 19 . 5/20/2021
can you post the map of the Horizons Beyond Galaxy on deviantart
| OMAC001 chapter 19 . 5/16/2021
Such dark portents...
| Chronus1326 chapter 19 . 5/14/2021
This was a good chapter, my favorite part was the Council discussions, and the Mystery Man.