| Reviews for A Dance All My Own |
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   DragonHeart89 chapter 5 . 1h I want to know what happnes next! |
| LAB1 chapter 5 . 9/7 Wow! This was an extremely detail oriented story! So much thought and effort went into it. It felt like you were really there! You've set yourself up for a sequel if you desired to go further with this story. |
| gaschalk chapter 5 . 9/5 What happened in the next two years? There is so much more to tell like what does DD do and what trouble did he try? What adventures does HP and Dobby have? Also what happens when Harry is finished with MMC? Is there a sequel to this story, is so what is the name so I can read it? This is a great story, so thanks. |
| GinnyPotter1986 chapter 2 . 8/19 i hope you don't mind, but im gonna use the information you provided here for my own diet, to see if it will work for you . i will let you know if and when it does |
| fantasyinmymind chapter 2 . 8/10 Always like reading this story - but would also like to see a sequel for it. Especially a scene when Dumbledork gets word Harry's not coming back and what school he is attending. |
| KnowInsight chapter 5 . 6/21 Nice! |
| maiqsmail chapter 2 . 6/5 Ugh imma break it off with this story. Very bloated pacing. Too much irrelevant details every other page. I appreciated the dietology rundown even if its placement was awkward here, but the rest was quite unnecessary. Why do I need the exact amount of robes here bought? How many and which potion ingredients he restocked? His exact schedule given in minutes? Trim it down to Chehov's gun and I'm game. Not... this. |
| maiqsmail chapter 1 . 6/5 Pretty decent story, nothing innovative and we all probably heard all these plot points time and again, but what the heck, let's read about all this one more. Dialogues are garbled and one sided, makes for an awkward flow of the story. |
| ElsieD chapter 5 . 6/3 I love happy endings! Thanks for writing. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/30 Excellent plot. A bit long winded in places. Thanks |
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/30 Second long, long, conversation with excruciating detail. |
| AerynS chapter 5 . 5/24 Love this story so much! Perhaps in time you would consider letting us know what happens when Harry graduates? |
| joelyn chapter 5 . 4/15 Please more love your story |
| DLillith21 chapter 5 . 3/20 I really enjoyed this story overall. I agree that a few places the details went too deep to really make sense for the context. But I liked the world and friendships you created. My disappointment is the ending. It feels like it needs an epilogue. Dumbledore reaction, settle into MMC, etc. Felt short changed on the wrap up. |
| Quaziemoto79 chapter 5 . 2/3 2/2024 Cool story, very enjoyable, was sorry it ended so quickly. I'll have to check for more of your superb writing. |