Reviews for A Dance All My Own |
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cos2bh chapter 5 . 1/16 Fantastic fic, I so wish to know what happened to Harry's journey in the MMC and how does APWBD respond to it. :( |
knttr chapter 5 . 1/5 Utterly outstanding story! definitley on my reread list! The MMC sounds like an amazing school. If you wrote even a one-shot about Harry's time on board I would love to read it. Well done! |
Guest chapter 5 . 12/16/2023 Awesome story |
dragonheart117 chapter 4 . 11/24/2023 the story was alright. Sorta long winded shopping list sorta thing. Could have compressed alot of information dumps, but for what it is, it does it rather well. What killed it for me was the no sex thing. Like really, was that really nessisary to add, just another random thing that makes me double take and go wat. it kills immersion. The age of the people on board are basically adults for quite a number of the people on board. Harry should at least double take and think well shit, jumped one controlling asshole for another. The last one was harry having a different name suddenly. Not only does that invalidate all previous protection oaths its also just a stupid unnessisary detail that you ignore a second later by using harry again. 4/10 If it was more story and plot focused it would be 7/10 maybe 7.5 to 8. Although I'm sure some people love the super detailed parts, so take my review with a grain of salt |
BlazeStryker chapter 2 . 11/17/2023 Considering that the Dursleys were said to have fished Harry's glasses from the bargain bin, the fact they worked at all is fishy. In any Headbastard setting (remember, Headbastards Must Die!) I would put it that Harry having the worst-appearing shades available would be Albus' idea of further stunting Harry's life. This is how it goes with abusive neglectful malicious authority... Headbastards Must Die. (By the end of the fic) |
tawnya.penner chapter 2 . 10/24/2023 Fabulous story! I was so disappointed it was only 5 chapters, at first, but the chapters are so long, it works great! |
Acacia Vix chapter 5 . 10/13/2023 would've liked an epilogue seeing Dumbledore's reactions and whatnot and how Morty ended off, but yeah, really good story overall, thank you for writing it |
her-my-own chapter 5 . 9/14/2023 Great story! a little let down by the ending, it feels unfinished but I understand some writers like to leave things open. |
Nulled Void chapter 5 . 9/5/2023 good |
Guest chapter 5 . 7/26/2023 I love this fic. I hope you one day decide to write a sequel. I'd love to find out dumbledore's reaction, and also how Harry does at MMC. |
Willow Dreams chapter 5 . 7/28/2023 Another absolutely awesome story. Thank you. |
LongLiveTheKing32 chapter 5 . 7/7/2023 But what about Dumbledore's reaction? and If that place in Canada helped Sirius and how did Harry and Dobby go at MMC and did Hedwig have chicks? for Godsake you can't just leave it like that! |
Apprentice Tom chapter 5 . 7/1/2023 Nice job. I enjoyed the story. |
xu ya ping chapter 4 . 6/25/2023 I take a Chinese class but I have only completed a year of it. I don't have the tones capable on my computer, but in chapter four it says "xie xie nin de bang zhu" and I can't translate anything but the thank you. Can someone help? |
Rebe Marauder chapter 5 . 6/22/2023 Me ha encantado. ¿Hay o habrá una secuela? Me encantaría saber más. |