| Reviews for A Dance All My Own |
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   Potter Abducted by Penguins chapter 1 . 9/30/2017 You forgot the fact that Ginny also ransacked the boys' dorm and stole back the Diary. I have no sympathy for thieves like her. I like the fact that Harry is studying more and not slacking off as he used to. Ron is a bad influence. Now if Hermione would stop being so bossy and give Harry some slack, that'd be great. Also she needs to stop criticizing Harry if he swears. She's not his mother, and I don't even think she has the right to do that. It is also great that Harry is able to see through Dumbledore's machinations. I hope you continue on with this story. |
| Penny is wise chapter 1 . 9/30/2017 Awesome first chapter. |
| perpetualblyss chapter 1 . 9/30/2017 Loving it so far. I do love a pro-active and suspicious Harry. Kudos! |
| duskrider chapter 1 . 9/30/2017 Interesting I do wonder who he will go on a date with now maybe these events changing and his schedule changing could lead to him meeting and befriending some more people. |
| Mionefan chapter 1 . 9/30/2017 Pretty comprehensive first chapter! Minimal spelling errors, so that's all good too. You took a unique idea for the first task and I look forward to see what you'll do for the rest of the story. Portraying Hermione the way you have unsettles me, but that's just my Hermione preference as a life partner for Harry speaking. Maybe pair her with Neville? I wouldn't mind that. Harry need a girlfriend at some point but not Ginny! My choices would be either Susan, Daphne or Padma. Perhaps Luna would work as well. My choices are just that...mine. You, of course, will do whatever you wish and I won't criticize you for your choices. |
| Lunaschild2016 chapter 1 . 9/30/2017 I am loving the story so far! Excellent. |
| Innortal chapter 1 . 9/30/2017 Nice start. |
| sharina.lukofnak chapter 1 . 9/30/2017 Love it. Can't wait for more |
| kurokitsune666 chapter 1 . 9/30/2017 This is a rather interesting story and I look forward to reading more of it! |
| GinnyLover14 chapter 1 . 9/30/2017 Welcome back! Great seeing a new story from you! Could you update your profile? |
| RobC chapter 1 . 9/30/2017 Great to see you writing again. |
| ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 1 . 9/30/2017 Wonderfully long first chapter and I've always enjoyed 4th year stories. It could have been a true turning point in Harry's life and you've done a great job of making it so. Thanks for sharing! |
| fitzgema chapter 1 . 9/30/2017 What a great start to a story! It sounds like this will be another fun story, thanks for your talent :) |
| miner249er chapter 1 . 9/30/2017 a long start but a good first chapter. glad to see you posting something new |
| ZanyMuggle chapter 1 . 9/30/2017 Good work. It's really good to see you writing again. You originated one or two of the ideas that have been copied into cliches. I won't ask you to continue my favorite unnamed story *cough*Trust*cough* because no reader has the right to demand more from an unpaid writer. I will say that I'm eager to read whatever you post. Thanks for writing! |