|Reviews for It started at a Intersection|
| steelbone532 chapter 3 . 5/30
You misspelled winter’s name as wither lol
| MageTGM chapter 2 . 5/25
You: Mage is that my fanfic?
Me: This is FILTH! FILTH!
*Whacks Etinaistay with their fanfic*
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/17
Make jaune a detective trying to bring the sdc and wf to justice
| Bill Gopher chapter 1 . 5/14
I like the start, but I have one question; is it the Schnee Dust Co, the Schnee Drug Co or Schnee Medicine Co.?
| steelbone532 chapter 1 . 5/13
This first chapter has potential. Looking forward to where it leads.
Things to point out, there are spelling mistakes here and there, and some sentences needs commas.
I recommend asking someone to proof read your chapters, it can help.
| Desluk chapter 1 . 5/12
I am looking forward to the rewrite as this first chapter has me excited to see the rest.
| Celestialfae chapter 1 . 2/24
By the way, love the story. and the name of the fic you mentioned is called "Blood and Ink" by ShowMeYourFury. Dont read if you are not a fan of unhappy endings or if you are not so interested in seeing main characters get maimed or killed. No spoilers.
This will be very interesting indeed. Keep it up.
| Puf da majk drgn chapter 8 . 1/17
Pls Update soon. Can't wait to read your great work. Thcx.
| THB4 chapter 8 . 11/19/2017
Finished reading the other chapters you have up. XD I wonder what Yang is up to. From Tai and Raven's part earlier I wonder if Yang and Ruby are sisters. Is Cinder in love with Ruby or is she the security Yang hired to watch Ruby or both.
I wonder who else is in love with Ruby. I kind of want want to see a Ruby child fitre dream for Yang and Cinder. If Yang and Ruby are blood related in this story then it would be a nightmare for Yang. For Cinder one of her underlings inturpt her dream making her mad. Keep up the good work can't wait to read more.
| THB4 chapter 3 . 11/19/2017
I know this is only chapter 3 and I have 5 more chapters to catch up on. But I had to say this. Qrow is very sneaky about hiding the fact who Ruby's family is. Its almost he is setting up Blake amd Weiss for some fail. I wonder if that was Jaune who Ruby saved. I wonder what Yang would do if she found out Ruby was in a fight or that two girls are after her lil sis.
| Kiotheboss2k chapter 8 . 11/18/2017
I love these dreams so much. They're the cutest pices of fluff EVER!
| Nagaichi chapter 8 . 11/18/2017
| KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 7 . 11/18/2017
The A/N during the chapter when you mentioned it was a dream was incredibly bad. By doing that you are saying your readers are a bunch of idiots and can't figure things out for themselves. Rule of thumb for writers is that the readers are smarter than they are. You as a writer don't want to explain every little thing, the readers can figure things out without the need of the author telling them.
Nice little chapter.
| Nagaichi chapter 7 . 11/17/2017
| Etinaistay chapter 1 . 11/17/2017
Also its just a dream. Anything can happen in a dream.