This story is so enthralling. I love it so much, and I love your interpretations of the characters. For this chapter specifically, THANK YOU for giving Luigi a way to be all the way at the bottom of the river. I like the idea of the hands giving enticing voices like the weird voices in the River Twygz Bed theme. When you brought up Prince Peasley I was pleasantly surprised! I was thinking about him when Luigi's bisexuality was brought up, and was wondering if he'd be mentioned.

As for Blumiere, I really liked that take on his backstory. It's always really cool for me to see how different authors flesh it out, and I liked the names you gave the supporting characters. And his poor mother! I liked that you also made him in touch with nature, because I think that's a trait that's often overlooked. He was said to love and cherish the world before he lost Timpani, plus unless the fall from the cliff was intentional, it's possible he was on a walk. Also, I was thinking of North Korea when you mentioned the anti-human songs!

I'm glad Luigi got to finally reunite with Mario. I feel horrible thinking about what's going to happen at the end of the game, but I'm interested to see where you go with it!

I also am really enjoying the LMentio pairing. It just made sense that it started out as a manipulation, and I like that it really became sincere. Watching them fall in love was so heartwarming. And the love scene was in good taste, as well.

Great chapter!

Why do I have the feeling Luigi will get flashbacks of being Mr.L?

I'm pretty sure he didn't say it because of the end scene where it's revealed. I'm sure there were a few oblivious people who didn't realize until then.

Even though the chapter's from the game I still enjoyed reading it - like you said it was necessary to include this. Can't wait to read more!

"Look, a distraction!" Haha, that part had me rolling!
Shame he doesn't remember much right now. It's not going to be easy for Dimentio to do him in. Not that it's hard or anything, but he might shed a tear.

Fantastic chapter, can't wait for more!

Oof, so close. The tragedy of Luigi being the one the whole prophecy hinges on really comes through here.

Fantastic chapter! I felt so bad for L since he has to deal with such important information about his identity. Can't wait for more!

Fantastic chapter!

How DARE you make me feel sorry for Dimentio!

Also, great chapter! ;) Poor L... So much pain and anguish in this chapter...

Ooo, things are getting good! I love it!

This chapter was really interesting, as always. Can't wait for more!

Aw, snap, I wasn't expecting this. I could see that Dimentio was growing fond of Mr. L and I suspected that his fondness would cause Dimentio some pain and regret for his actions. But I expected him to forge ahead with his plans in spite of it all and leave Mr. L in the dark. I was NOT expecting Dimentio to fall in love for real and confess his entire plot to Mr. L! What's going to happen now! I'm on the edge of my seat!

Well, the secret was bound to get out one day. At least I can openly say I love you in the reviews without looking like creep now!

I'm glad you could use that line!

After the sexual content warning asterisk, I liked how the first thing that came up was talking about feelings. Easily the sexiest part of the fic :p I'm joking!

Either way, I loved how smooth the dialogue was and how we finally got some insight on Dimentio's backstory! Keep writing babe! I love you!