| Reviews for Thunderstorm |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 9/30/2017 ...Not bad. Not bad at all. It was pretty good. |
 NormanWhitesmith chapter 1 . 9/30/2017 Please continue this, it was amazing! |
| Pikminfan chapter 1 . 9/30/2017 Great job! Please continue this. |