Glad I found this story. What an amazing start. I don’t think anyone has ever summed up what was going through Sarah’s mind on that beach so accurately.

Looking forward to more.

Kudos on a very satisfying ending to a great TV show.

I loved how Chuck's broken ribs made they first lovemaking since Sarah had been gone very painful. Please continue.

I loved how Sarah understood the implications of Nicholas Quinn. Please continue.

I loved Ellie's reaction when seeing Sarah with Chuck. Please continue.

I loved how Chuck mentioned Morgan's magical kiss idea. Please continue.

What a wonderful story, thanks for this. I like how you filled in the details of Chuck telling Sarah 'their story' on the beach; it was very believable. And the follow-up with Sarah coming to trust not only Chuck but herself was excellent.

A really good read as before. And I look forward to whatever you have for us next.

Well that was fun. I am always sure Sarah left the beach WITH Chuck, and I like getting a story where we not only see that play out but gets us well on the way to healing on many levels. You don't shy away from a lot of the hard issues, both in terms of Sarah current condition and wrongs from their past.
I also like some the holes you fill in Chuck's own backstory.
This was really terrific and I will look forward to your sequel!