Reviews for Struck By Lightning
MyNameIsTheYeeet chapter 26 . 11/12/2018
Says he will do double update next week, doesn't update for two months
Guest chapter 26 . 11/6/2018
Loveit and i cant wait for an update
TheRealShenron chapter 1 . 9/27/2018
updated on 9/11 ALLAHU ACKBAR
rebfan90 chapter 26 . 9/21/2018
great chapter
Drzgee chapter 17 . 9/14/2018
So like did Thalia get raped? Cause that rough man. But just finished reading the whole fic, it was interesting
rock the second chapter 26 . 9/14/2018
When you had percy reflect on the prophecy after chronos gave him his sword, there's a typo where he talks about the king he asked for a quest from.
Chomper32 chapter 26 . 9/13/2018
Great Work! I really liked the Arc and can’t wait for the next to start! :)
GuardianOfTheUniverse chapter 26 . 9/12/2018
Great chapter update soon.
Death Fury chapter 26 . 9/12/2018
i did not see that happening...
great job!
MasterTrident chapter 26 . 9/11/2018
Wow, Poseidon's death was so sudden...

I've got three words regarding that:

What about Triton?

I wonder, had Thalia not called out to Luke, would Poseidon still be alive? Also, what will Zeus think of Percy being made the heir of Poseidon?

With regards to your scheduling, I'd say you really shouldn't sweat it too much trying to reach the end of the story by a specific date (unless there is some specific personal reason behind the deadline you're setting). Either way, good luck with school — it takes priority over anything on the internet.
Bruce77 chapter 26 . 9/11/2018
Son of a-! I adore your writing, I really do, but I abhor you right now. Talk about tragedy. You did it in true George R.R. Martin fashion, you motherfucker! What happened at the end there felt like reading Ned Starks execution all over again! And Percy is like Jon Snow in this case. Fuck! This is why I should stop getting so invested in fanfiction. Smh! I love your writing, man but fuck you!
Box Fan chapter 26 . 9/11/2018
Well...that was something
Some parts turned out exactly as I expected
But that ending ...
I’ll be waiting to see how you’ll pull that off
XWFY chapter 26 . 9/11/2018
Don't have much time to review but I wanted to say that I love this, and keep up the good work. I'm kind of hoping that Percy and Thalia will both get immortality but at the same time I don't, if that makes any sense. Whatever happens, its your story, write it how you think it should go. If others don't like it, their problem. I don't know what others think of this story but I've seen stories abandoned because of the negative response, whether it's to having gay characters or unpopular ships, and I hope you don't fall victim to this, but just in case, I love this.
a311243549 chapter 26 . 9/11/2018
WHOOOO! THAT WAS SO FRICKIN AWESOME!‼!‼!‼!‼ Seriously, I loved this. And the thing with Chaos was a great forshadowing. It's nice to finally see the other side of that Primordial. Poor Percy. Well, at least his father will regenerate eventually. I'm guessing he'll hand over seakingship to Triton, as he doesn't really seem to be the administrative type, going by his talk with Annabeth in The Sea of Monsters (it was after they discovered her Fatal Flaw). Hopefully that will prevent any bad blood between them. I wonder if Thalercy is going to have to travel into Tartarus to confront Chaos, since that seems to be where it was currently residing. If so, could we have a notevil!Nyx? I mean, she probably doesn't want her parent to rise any more than they do. Finally, I have found the perfect avenger!Percy soundtrack. Search "Fallen Blood" on Youtube, and you'll see.

Can't wait to see what wonders you come up with next!
[0900PT]
Osravix chapter 26 . 9/11/2018
Wow, you got me good there. Wasn't expecting THAT to happen
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