|Reviews for Where The Heart Is|
| NitroChji 240 chapter 10 . 5/26
Ooohhhhh... I was SO hoping that either Misty or Ash died, making it an AAML fanfic, but with tragedy! I also like Giovanni as a character, and always wish he would win in some way.
| iamlunch chapter 10 . 11/29/2013
I admit, I never liked TR fics but this one was quite good!
| Anthony1l chapter 10 . 9/11/2011
This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.
| wprosser2008 chapter 8 . 4/29/2010
Good story so far. Normally I wouldn't comment on a finished story until I finish reading it, but I just wanted to point out one thing that I noticed. You had Pikachu leave the cell room twice. Once with the note to Geovani (I know that's spelled wrong), and again when Ash was leaving to go help Matt.
| AshandMistyLove chapter 10 . 4/3/2010
um. WHAT DO I SAY? so, Ash and Misty, were childhood pals, both of their parents murdered. And Sabrina, Erika, Blaine, Koga and LT. SURGE all DEAD?
VERY FREAKY STORY, BUT EXCEPTIONALLY GOOD.
| SatoKasu4ever chapter 10 . 12/27/2009
I loved it!
AAML pokeshipping 4 ever!
| draco122 chapter 10 . 11/29/2009
wow that was just so amazing. Your stories speak to me in so many ways. I love them. This is one of the most heaviest stroies i have every read. I loved every second i spent reading it. Something at the end about the other gym leaders would have been nice. You know like Ash morning them but thsi is yoru story so i can not say. Over all it was 15 out of 10 maybe 20 out of 10.
| draco122 chapter 7 . 11/29/2009
it is wonderful each chapter jsut gets better and better. How do you do it?
| draco122 chapter 6 . 11/29/2009
wow that was even havey then the last chapter. I am shaking in my boots. (Not wearing boots) But that was nice. And scary. Might want to rasie the rating a bit jsut a thoguht.
| draco122 chapter 5 . 11/29/2009
oaky that was heavy and hard core having ash killed Sabarina i know she was tuff but she did not deserved that.
| FTEcho 4 chapter 10 . 9/21/2009
Yay. Good story again. This story reminded me a bit of Bittersweet Romanticide's "Rebellious Thinking". Actually, I think this one was written first, but they're both pretty different. The Team Rocket angle is similar, but not by a whole lot.
Um... I liked the plot, and I liked especially how you managed to keep Pokemon a part of it, even though there were guns and all that. Few can do that successfully.
I very much liked the ending, although I think that the police would probably still arrest Ash. I mean, he had a change of heart, but he was still an accomplice to five murders. They'd probably be lenient, but they'd still arrest him. But I'm willing to overlook that. I enjoyed the developing Ash and Misty romantic plot through the entire novel. And now I'm done reviewing, because I'm very, very tired.
Oh, and I really like that Dream Theater line. It doesn't work here, but it does pretty well sum up the events of all the Love stories, especially LUV. I have another line for this one, the last lines of "In the Presence of Enemies Pt. 2":
"In the hour of darkness,
the moment I feared has passed,
the moment I lost my faith,
My soul is my own now,
I do not fight for you,
I think I can find a Dream Theater line for anything at this point. They have a lot of songs.
| SDM56 chapter 10 . 8/7/2008
| Shippo123 chapter 10 . 3/27/2004
That was so good! One of the best! It belongs in my favorite stories list...
- Bai! Keep writing!
| DaJollyMan chapter 10 . 3/20/2004
O! This fanfic was awesome. Very original!
PS: School Days is awesome too!
| The Awakener Viari chapter 10 . 3/19/2004
AW! it was great! i loved the ending! great fic.