Okay, I have checked your profile for part two and I know it's been roughly three years since you've updated (I hope you're doing well), but hopefully you'll see this and know that you will have someone to read part two if you choose to start posting again :-) This was terrifically written and I honestly read the entire thing in three hours.

I keep reading the part one on each chapter and I'm so scared that it doesn't end or I'm left hanging. I love this fic so much and I'm so happy I was able to stumble upon it!

This is so good! I absolutely love how you wrote Jack and Elizabeth!

this was amazing. I've read hundreds of fanfics, only recently have gotten into the POTC fandom, but this is a rare gem. it's very seldom you find a completed fic that is so wonderfully written that hooks you like this. bravo. and please don't stop writing. you are a real talent, and your work is beautiful.

Super Hot

Please update, I love it

please update, it's very interesting

I literally cannot tell you how f***ing happy I am that you wrote this, it's ammazzing! I've read many POTC fanfics (no need to question my sanity thank you xdd) but nobody has got ahold of Jack quite like you! Feels like everything he says and does IS Jack, not just some fanfic character pretending to be him. I literally can't tell how refreshing it was to read your words. Same thing goes for everyone else too actually, even with the slight changes to the story, the characters never felt odd or out of place. Also Thank You for not romanticising Jack too much, I feel like a lot of fanfic writers try to paint him in false colours, like he's a lot less carefree, stubborn and greedy than he actually is. I feel like the insight we got for Jack was spot on, showing his humanity but not weakening him or making him a childish, hopeless romantic. Luv you, thank you for this amazing exerience!

Also: I'm dyning for any new pirate content, possibly (please please) the continuation of this story, or even your own vision of what would happen next. I think you've proven that you're more than capable of presenting a great story without sticking closely to the films, soo I can't wait!
I hope you haven't abandoned this story, since I saw that it has been quite a while since you updated it, so please please please just let us hear from you!

Heyyyy! I just finished your fic. Damn I have to admit I've read a lot of excellent things on Fanfiction but rares are the stories that got into my skin like this one.

This was truly and most sincerely one of the best things I've ever read I felt reaaaally close to Lizzie in her taste for freedom but especially in her flaws, everything thing seemed natural and never out of place or context.

And goosh this has to be the most realistic and believable Jack sparrow I ever encountered, savvy? Also damn lovable, can't lie.

As proof of my unusual and deep attachment to your writing I event went to your profile page to see if there where a part 2 of this story somewhere, and I didn't find any so I'm begging you, I don't want to put any pressure, as a hobbyist writer myself, I won't do that to you, but at least just let me know if there is currently something somewhere that exists or that might one day bloom here to give us the rest of the story.

I wish you the best of life and I sincerely hope you'll continue writing no matter the topic because you have a clear gift in the field, my deepest respect and thanks for the marvellous hours of reading and maybe we'll see each other one day in the reviews of some other writing? XD

Vyxenn

I totally loved it

i would love to finnish this story its turning outto be a great one

will you write more? it's soooo good!

Lovely chapter, can’t wait to read more!

Ugh the conflict kills me, but very well written

Much sadness, but great ending to a chapter, le sigh... not looking good for these two at all