Reviews for Coming Apart
DS2010 chapter 4 . 10/13
Damn looking bad for Jason, hoping TAC finds the really killer
Denise3130 chapter 4 . 10/13
Great update ! Wow, Bull is really losing it...the stress of Diana's murder along with their unborrn baby's death
and him being the accused killer along with not remembering anything about that night is really getting to him.

I never expected him to blow up at Benny and Marissa like that.

What's next? Looking foward to more...
DS2010 chapter 3 . 10/10
Oh no he couldn't have done it
Denise3130 chapter 3 . 10/10
Wow... Bull is being set up as the murderer ?! Who is this guy who really did it?

Waking up like that with the knife in his hand had to have been a shock... luckily Benny caught that Bull is not acting like himself during the police questioning him and insisted he be checked out. Hppefully, the bloodwork wil show he was drugged.

He's an emotional mess though... crying at the police station during questioning and then blowing up when Dani, Chunk and Cable were gossiping.

And now, he's been arrested on murder charges... will the team be able to prove he's innocent?

Can't wait to read more!
DS2010 chapter 2 . 10/7
no! hurry up hoping it is a bad dream
Denise3130 chapter 2 . 10/6
OMG... what just happened?

One minute, they're celebrating Diana's pregnancy and discussing her moving to NY...and then next...wow.

What happened to Jason? It sounds like he was drugged. Is he really dead like Diana was told before she got stabbed?

And whoever this is just killed Diana and their baby...

Don't leave us hanging like this...please update soon!
Denise3130 chapter 1 . 10/3
Nice beginning!

What is Diana going to tell Bull?

Can't wait to see where you are taking the story next! :)