Reviews for Please Explain |
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![]() ![]() ![]() And kick Sophia's ass up one tree and down another. This was an interesting scenario to read! Kind of a shame it's not expanded on any further, but there's not much I can see to expand upon thatwould matter. At least, not right now. Probably could with some spitballing, but it still wouldn't be easy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Taylor's patience just went right out the window at the end there, gawt damn. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this I do, short and sweet. I'd have expected quick chat with emma's mom and a call to the PRT for master effects in her shoes but this is also great fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that's... hmm... that good after one summer camp? i'd almost call power shenanigans, but then sophia was always self learned so... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooooh, I liked this! I know, I said I was going to sleep, but I laid down and my eyes popped wide open. So I read this awesome short story. I LIKE the idea of derailing Sophia's screwed up sense of the world before it has a chance to take hold in Emma. Way to go, Taylor! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an unexpected fic. Interesting take on such an axiom of the worm verse |
![]() ![]() ![]() I assume from the gap since publication that this is completed... But I'd love to see how this goes after a time jump to when Sophia goes into the Wards. |
![]() ![]() Perfect method of taking SS's philosophy apart - with the side effect of Happy Emma. Love it. Thanks for sharing this with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Only problem with this story is that 'complete' at the end of chapter 2... Clearly this is only the beginning of something that could be rather impressive. Also, staff work. :) Never enough staff work in CQC scenes! For an organization like the Protectorate, one would think staff and baton work would be standard training, being as they are 'non-lethal' weapons (when applied with the appropriate modicum of skill). Besides, I'm suddenly getting a Xena(Taylor) and Gabrielle(Emma) vibe :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not bad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice take on how it could have gone. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice |
![]() ![]() YES! FUCKING YEEEESSSSSSSSS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This one is nice. Short, sweet, and to the point. Interesting perspective on things as well. |