|Reviews for Remnants unexpected maidens|
| SqueegeeWing chapter 11 . 2h
Look out, Remnant. Crota's in town. I remember she showed up in an earlier chapter when Salem was using a seer, but I think you took that out. This chapters works as a better first appearance for Crota anyway.
The one thing I question is one of Cardin's thoughts toward Atheon. In canon, I don't think Cardin ever acted as if men are superior to women. But the key word is "canon" and this is a fanfic, so it's ultimately your call.
Overall, this is a good chapter and I look forward to reading many more.
| WritersMind chapter 11 . 9/18
"Death is a road. Death is a metamorphosis." - Whisper of the Worm
I love this story, keep it up
| Jaegergamer chapter 11 . 22h
crota: "TRIGGERED" (nice one)
| icons8-thumbs-up chapter 11 . 9/17
So is this gu-*ahem* girl *ahem* going to join Atheon in her team, or as a separate entity from Beacon altogether? How is Crota going to react to finding out that another being from his corner of reality is here, namely Atheon?
| Guest chapter 11 . 9/17
Who is on Atheon’s team again!?
| littleboyblack17 chapter 11 . 9/19
This is pretty good love the way Atheon speaks can’t for crota
| Sairen Ray chapter 11 . 9/18
well I was going to ask when the others would start showing up, but that answers my question.
| ptl chapter 11 . 9/18
Yang Crota x Nora OH MY GOD! MADNESS AND BAD PUN HURRICANE!
| Chinchi37 chapter 11 . 9/17
| ConnorPerson chapter 11 . 9/17
Was wondering when we were gonna meet the others
| DireProphet chapter 11 . 9/17
| DireProphet chapter 1 . 9/17
| Hasashiki chapter 11 . 9/17
Dude, story so far is just amazing! Can't wait to read the next chapter, keep up the good job!
| G3r1k chapter 11 . 9/17
Hohoho this is gunna be fun.
| Slaggedfire chapter 11 . 9/17
God, you're Cardin is shit. I like the story, but holy shit dude.