|Reviews for Relatives|
| Greer123 chapter 18 . 8/21
You did a great job writting this story.
| Amari45 chapter 18 . 8/21
I get that you lost interest in the story because the two don’t mix very well but you could have easily remedied it by cutting out the most of Danny Phantom and just keeping the main elements and making the story same but different. Maybe he was a hidden son of Kronos, the oldest in fact, but was hidden away by their mom in a realm that time doesn’t move and was taken out by clockwork who could be a titan of prophecy or time and raised him as a son in the actual Tartarus instead of the ghost zone. See just working the material a little differently causes them to fit much better together.
| dnguyen686 chapter 18 . 8/21
Will there be a sequel?
| Tsukikageshi chapter 18 . 8/20
It was a good story and interesting.
| hrisi292 chapter 18 . 8/20
| Determination4296 chapter 18 . 8/20
| Among Smoke chapter 17 . 7/22
Omg this is fantastic! I’m a big fan and I hope to see an update in the future.
Your writing is dioulouge heavy in some parts but it works. :)
| Determination4296 chapter 17 . 6/26
well this is good, i can't wait t oread more chapters if there is more
| Greer123 chapter 17 . 6/26
LOve how Danny baited Zues in this chapter.
| cg037 chapter 17 . 6/26
Nice update, keep up the good work.
| hrisi292 chapter 17 . 6/25
It is called shish kebab, not shish kebob. I would, it is a traditional dish at home after all.
| dnguyen686 chapter 15 . 5/9
Ahhh this is so awesome pls update XD
| Devious Purrloin chapter 16 . 5/3
| Devious Purrloin chapter 11 . 5/3
Exit 954 is in Amity Park, huh?
| Devious Purrloin chapter 9 . 5/3
"Percy was halfway through my burger before he remembered to breathe" Since that this is in Phantom's point of view (I think), that would mean that Percy is eating Danny's burger. You have to stay consistent in who's doing what