|Reviews for Relatives|
| dnguyen686 chapter 15 . 5/9
Ahhh this is so awesome pls update XD
| Devious Purrloin chapter 16 . 5/3
| Devious Purrloin chapter 11 . 5/3
Exit 954 is in Amity Park, huh?
| Devious Purrloin chapter 9 . 5/3
"Percy was halfway through my burger before he remembered to breathe" Since that this is in Phantom's point of view (I think), that would mean that Percy is eating Danny's burger. You have to stay consistent in who's doing what
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/10
I love this story... hope you update soon!
| Zapster45 chapter 16 . 3/11
I really like the story and I can't wait to find out what happens next.
| dnguyen686 chapter 16 . 3/4
Pls update more, this is so awesome XD
| Greer123 chapter 16 . 2/22
Looks like Hades is going to get very upset with Danny and his daughter in this story.
| youngjusticeship chapter 16 . 2/17
things are heating up ellies blood is golden
| A Grim Fate chapter 1 . 2/17
Not bad. I like the start, but I think you could have integrated the two stories better by making clockwork the primordial of time Chronos. (Yes the two masters of time in Greek mythology have a name that's pronounced the same)
Its really just a minor detail that makes so much more sense if used to explain clockwork's Omniscient.
Other than personal preference this is amazing! Keep it up!
| cg037 chapter 16 . 2/17
A great update, keep up the good work.
| Guest chapter 15 . 1/27
This is great, I love it
| KittyKatt Uzumaki chapter 15 . 1/19
| WordSmyth chapter 1 . 1/16
Good story, but your grammar leaves a lot to be desired.
| Greer123 chapter 15 . 1/11
I love the part where Ellie plays with Cerberus.