Reviews for Two Black Dots |
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![]() ![]() Plz write more! It’s not done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please, you have to continue this its absolutely amazing, not just as a great ship fic, but its beautifully written, I hope you yourself are doing okay and one day come back to this |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is it- my favorite line in ANYTHING I've ever read; '"He was just trying his hand at reverse-frowning"'. I literally died reading that. I normally don't write comments until I finish reading everything but I just had to say something about that line. Thank you so much for creating this fic, I'm thoroughly enjoying it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is so good! Looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweetheart, this story is truly amazing and one of the better written ones on here! I'm so sad to see that it's been on hold for so long because I desperately want to know how it all turns out! Hope you're doing well and can somehow find the time and/or motivation to finish this gorgeous piece of writing. Lots of love! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love love love this story! You did an amazing job with all the characters and I especially love the hilarious text messages between everyone. This is a great story and hoping for an update soon? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excuse me - Walks over to a nearby cliff and screams into the chasm - I have so many emotions about this, and I'm still so thankful to have read this, even with my now raging heart over it's incompletion. Hope you're doing well, regardless. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I AM AT WORK, AND I AM HAVING FAR TOO MANY EMOTIONS ABOUT THIS CHAPTER. ABOUT THAT SCENE. AAAAAAAAAAAAGHHHHHHHHHHHHH! YES I KNOW I AM SCREAMING INTO AN EMPTY CHASM |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love that your representing their emotions towards each other as the warmth and radiance of sunlight. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooooooh that's a marvelous chapter ending. And yes, I can see that this story hasn't been touched in many years, but it's getting me through a boring work day, and it's enjoyable ~ Thank you for writing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mineta just needs to be launched into orbit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Manipulative. Mother. Frickers. I am rage. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Only chapter two, and I want to punt Naegi into the atmosphere. This is pretty good overall! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! This fanfic's fantastic! Smooth pacing and writing! Storyline-very interesting(i wish I can think of a storyline as good as you!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE oh PRETTY PLEASE you MUST update this incredible story! This cliffhanger is killing me. I know it's been years, but I am desperate to know where this story would have gone! |