Reviews for The Path to Villainy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Omg! I love this story so far! I love the way you write and the flow of the story! I can't wait to read the next chapter! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing! this is an amazing story! love it soooooo much! thank you for updating XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy Tomura 0oO Tomura grew! Now Izuku just needs to accept... |
![]() ![]() Oh meh gosh |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this was brilliant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() man your story rocks! can't wait for the next chapter! your writing is awsome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() My heart would fall into the abyss if I met All for One so Midoriya's getting a quirk from All for One? Will it work? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I find Izuku's jealousy of Eijiro quite intriguing. Keep it coming |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep going with this story I found it interesting also the fact Izuku says I want Kacchan to notice me makes me wonder what quirk you might give him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow yandere Deku is pretty funny. Man he is creepily possessive. I like how you've made him a victim if circumstances rather than suddenly making hin evil. I really enjoyed the story so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done and I really liked how Izuku decided to clear the air. It shows that even though circumstances put him on the side of the villains he still has a noble heart. At the same time Kirishima's actions make sense for him as it demonstrates that he's a loyal friend... The question is does it make him a proper hero because after all he's letting someone slide for attacking another person without warning. As such while he did good for Izuku, the fact that an argument can be made that he only acted for Bakugou's benefit and not acting for doing the right thing would serve to push Izuku further into villainy. After all Izuku doesn't know Kirishima's thought process, especially since Kirishima didn't explain himself. Not going to lie I'm expecting a series of errors and poor communication will continue throughout the fic, which would make perfect sense. After all they are teenagers, not everyone can tell when someone needs someone, and strangers don't pour their souls to each other. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is rather brilliant. The fact you properly show Izuku's fall as a slow process and how it comes about comes off as very realistic. Which makes it makes much better in my opinion then the certain other Villain!Izuku stories, they tend to go make it feel too fast or a bit unrealistic for me to accept it as a natural considering Izuku has a strong core. Keep up the excellent work and I'm eager to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue! |