Max should meet the Longbottom parents.

His ability to read minds and experience fear should be able to tell if there is any hope of healing them, as he'll be able to tell if they're still in there.

Wow... the dark curse was one thing, and it was well time Hermione got her arrogance knocked out of her. She needed to learn she's not infallable.

But this... dropping a mind reading hat on that POSSESSES THE FOUNDER'S MEMORIES onto a Horcrux is just asking for trouble, and is clearly Hermione holding the Idiot Ball for the sole sake of plot progression.

I might drop this story if it doesn't shape up, no matter how utterly delightful it has been up to now.

Why the hell would Hermione- the most ruthless of the Golden Trio, who in canon kept Skeeter in a jar and blackmailed her, and never hesitated to take people down hard, and in this world is even more proactive and problem solving- want to spare Voldemort's life, of all people?

That's utterly illogical nonsense.

Why the hell would this no-nonsense go-getter problem solver Hermione NOT permanently END the threat of Malfoy now that he's demonstrated he is perfectly willing to murder her?

Why the hell would she give him a second chance?

So he can come up with a better plan to murder her or one of her friends?

Majorly disappointed with Hermione here, and it feels immensely out of character for this Hermione to act like this.

wonderful story, there are parts people would say are absurd from how over powered Hermione seemed to be, and yet I say there's nothing more comedic than a person simply being in the right moment at the right time that turned them to the person they are now. It wouldn't be hard to imagine Hermione simply striving to be that person, and I admit I might have bias due to my own love to powerful characters, but that is all to say I thoroughly loved and enjoy every single thing about this, cheers to you, writer, for creating such a beautiful and entertaining piece of art, that I'll be sure to read again and again! 333

This was a fun story, but I understand how it gave you writers block. Things were going off the rails.

So the whole sound thing was about a basilisk? Not some actual cure

This saddens me... So much wasted potencial. Why did you dumb down Hermione?

If you ask me, her fitting wood type for her wand should be Redwood. Since Parselmouth!Hermione clearly has 'a talent for turning disaster into opportunity.' And as a Parselmouth her core will either be the horn of a Uktena or Basilisk (more likely the latter, since it's a new discovery that one has been here the whole time and the former (and the wood) is in SERIOUS short supply)... or any core available

Draco said that he and his father can 'speak A LITTLE BIT of Parseltongue' and he had the absolute NERVE to call Hermione an 'amature'

This is such wonderful crack. I have not stopped smiling the entire time I've been reading this. I was a little skeptical about how long it was but I'm totally down for the ride, thank you for the laughter.

DMR

It's a huge pity that this wasn't continue.

poor Hermione didn't get to meet Toft. I'm sad now

*evil vindictive giggling* Malfoy a philanthropist. hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe

"I CANT RUN A COUNTRY" Omg. I'm dead. I've possibly quite literally died. I can't stop laughing.