Reviews for Divergence
Guest chapter 13 . 5/20/2017
You're an excellent writer so if you're going to make a career out of it, go for it! Drop some links on your profile to your original stuffs!
shin-jim99 chapter 17 . 11/22/2011
Well written, touching and imaginative. From the ending, I see you've read "The Lady, Or The Tiger?" by Frank Stockton. Stockton got exactly the same reaction as in your reviews - people basically screaming "who did he end up with? How does it really end?". Rudyard Kipling was going on a hunt in India with Stockton, and told Stockton when they were in the jungle together he was going to tie Stockton up, have an elephant put his foot on Stockton's head, and he would say "Last chance, Stockton. Was it the lady or the tiger?"
Toby860 chapter 17 . 10/12/2011
i really did enjoy this story. my sight on the ending has him going to mizuho and leaving shinji ikari bekind. the deciding factor was rei telling him to go to the other life but think of her. very good story. top notch.
T3Ko chapter 17 . 6/16/2011
Nice story. I liked this vey very much. And ending was dane extremly well. You had the patience to actually not to choose yourself and leave it to readers.

Savaris chapter 17 . 6/11/2011
Wow. Can't believe I missed this piece... Definitely one of your masterpieces in my opinion. In some points feel a bit rushed but the ending is superb, some people find it irksome but it is unique in that it leaves it to the reader who was the one who woke up... A continuation will leave one side devastated, so it is better to leave it like this. This is the type of ending which really calls out to the emotion of those reading this kind of work. Thanks for this treat Zentrodie.

Now I move to another of your fics, Anata no Ichiban Ni Naritai. Considering I'm also a fan of Nadesico (hate it's canon ending though), I keep missing the good stuff seriously. Friend of mind says good thing about your version...
WTF2002 chapter 17 . 3/30/2011
great story, but possibly the worst ending ever, why couldn't you just freaking make up your mind and pick an ending instead of leaving this open ended far i've read 2 of your stories and loved them both all until i reached the last chapter then in both stories you just seriously screwed both up...please for all future stories write actual endings...
Dairegh chapter 17 . 3/23/2010
Excellent story. Definitely among the best of the stories I've read. You are a great author, and I hope you continue to produce such works of art. I'm looking forward to reading you're other stories, so I'll see you soon (so to speak). For now, great job, I loved this story.


DragonGod926 chapter 17 . 8/26/2008
That was truly magnificent, however, the Hikari/Asuska was kinda rushed IMO. Leaving the ambigous ending was perfect, it would have been way too hard seeing either a devasted Misato or Mizuho with a dead Shinji or Kei, respectively. I will not ask for an epilogue for this very reason. Congrats on a great story. Just a question though, I found this in the Evangelion section; however, you should also create a counterpart Please Teacher story, from Kei's perspective...with the same final ending.
Invincible Shinji chapter 17 . 8/23/2008
Very good story. I really liked it. Ive already read it once, Im just cpoying it for myself now.
bgibbons chapter 17 . 7/20/2008
I would have never thought that a crossover between these two would work, but I was amazed at how well they actually work together. It is truly interesting how well the characters can be viewed as parallels (down to OT!Asuka ending up in canon with an OT!Kaji-equivalent)
advocatus chapter 17 . 7/11/2008
Just found and finished this story. I have to say you are sick sick bastard for ending it this way, but at the same time masterfully done. A well written story definitely worth reading.
Wildcard-JT chapter 3 . 6/14/2008
Sorry to say, I have been avoiding this fic for quite some time because I hadn't seen Onegai Teacher... until this week (Thank god for youtube) So now I figured I'd give this one a shot...I like what I see thus far!
Drifter950 chapter 17 . 9/23/2007
I, and my children, own both of the anime that you referred to. You have taken them and made a story that stand on its own.

I enjoyed "Divergence" very much. The number of reviews indicate that I am not the only one who enjoys most of your offerings here at fanfiction. I have read enough that I have put checks in both of the Favorites lists, and in the Author Alert list.

Thank you for a story that was well worth the time it took to read it.

May the MUSE be with you!

DRKSilent-Killer chapter 17 . 8/6/2007
i am goin to kill you man an i really would if you didn't have to update orders. plz send me a pm about which 1 he chose i don't know which 1 i'm so confused
Bobboky chapter 17 . 8/5/2007
wow, i kinda want to cry, to bad he did not have MPD, then he could have gone both places
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