Reviews for Surprises
Gamer 101 chapter 9 . 6/13
You should have a scene where Poseidon and Ouranos have duel to claim Estelle
Posh chapter 8 . 6/12
This is way to fast, slow down tye story please. You go from learniing that paul is posieden to oranos wanting celeste
Guest chapter 2 . 6/12
Who cares? You named her Sierra. It's your fic. Changing her name now is confusing for those who don't reac author's notes, like me.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12
1. Since when you can't hug a pregnant woman? And 2. I think I prefer Percy's sister being Paul's daughter.
The Patil Twins chapter 8 . 3/10
Hello everyone, I am the twin of the genius who wrote this masterpiece here :)
I just wanted to let y'all know, March is gonna be a busy month for us, since we have a lot of things going on. For example, we just got assigned a presentation that we have to present in front of a large, and I mean LARGE, conference. So we gotta do that. So if you don't hear from us for a while, don't worry, we're not dead. You know, I'm involved in a musical, and we both have finals, so, bear with us. You guys are awesome and give us great feedback!
Also, this story IS AMAZING!
-Parvati Patil
Guest chapter 8 . 3/7
I agree
Guest chapter 6 . 3/7
Please read others of these so you don't cross over
darlingdino131 chapter 8 . 3/7
ok I wanna say a couple things:
2. Yes those rolls are like my favorite food
3. I have read a ridiculous amount of fan fiction so about Percy and Estelle, and this one is one of my favs!
Thunderwolf7226 chapter 8 . 3/7
the rolls are good but I get tired of them for having them with my lunch everyday at work. this was good.
Dragem315Percy chapter 8 . 3/7

I have no words...
thesushiqueen chapter 7 . 11/16/2017
ReadingReader chapter 7 . 11/15/2017
Evil cliff again?! Well it was good as usul
YO chapter 5 . 11/15/2017
YO chapter 2 . 11/15/2017
Did the baby's name change?
Thunderwolf7226 chapter 7 . 11/15/2017
This was nice. It was short but good.
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