Bruh you are just forcing a brotherly bond between naruto and sasuke here, first sasuke never went theough suffering here, 2nd he has a brother, 3rd naruto himself said he isn’t that recognized so only a few people see him for him and sasuke would also have a few people who see him for him, its just forcing a comparison here that sasuke wanted what naruto has which is bullshit, naruto wanting what sasuke have is understandable and them even being best friends is understandable but having a brotherly bond only as kids not going through any big thing together, one already having a brother, yeh it sounds so forced like it’s just there because it was shown in the show, like i was really liking this story because of its uniqueness but that forced move just brought down the story’s uniqueness by a lot like the way you compared them, you can compared sasuke with naruto, sasuke can be compared to anybody then, with either the guy being his opposite by being poor or being the same as him by being rich, 2 peas in a pod comparison done. Now do you get my point on how stupid and forced that comparison sounded

Quick question. Where do you get the name Naples from with the team N.A.L.L? Also why do you say brown or yellow in color? Just curious is all. Good story overall, but you may need to work a bit on your wording however.

Fuck this I tried.

I look forward to it.

I understand that you want a fresh start. The trip was very beautiful, I hope you feel very comfortable with what you write. The only thing I can and will do is give you my support in Broken Moon. I hope you meet all your New Year's goals. Have a nice day and thanks for everything.

After rereading most of the whole thing (I admittedly skipped the RvB chapters) I was reminded of why I used to love this story

All of the main characters are well done and the action is pretty good. The pacing is really slow, but I don’t think it takes away from it. I honestly think that most of Silent Moon is outstanding and is one of the best things I’ve read on the site.

The Cardin arc was especially amazing and shows how long term story telling can positively affect a story (more on that later).

I do have some minor problems and one big issue with it. As I mentioned before, the pacing is incredibly slow and really drags in certain places.

Another problem I have is that everyone is uncomfortably horny everyone is. I wouldn’t be too irked by it if it was just one or 2 character’s running gag (Lapis and Amira actually managed to tie it back into their arcs and story). I think it’s just weird for a group of kids mostly compromised of minors to openly be having sex. TL;DR: Unnecessarily horny

Piggy backing off of the point, I think Naruto and Ruby kissing every 2 paragraphs really makes their relationship feel forced. There’s ways to show affection outside of kissing and cuddling. It just kinda felt like things moved way too quickly imo.

Now onto my biggest problem with the story: It goes downhill once Salem interrupts the Vytal Tournament. Suddenly making this slow story kick into break neck pacing really kills a ton of the tension imo. Characters being killed off left and right without much care makes it just feel like needless shock factor.

Everything feels so rushed to set up the big war (only for that not to ever happen) is a huge let down imo. Also, it might just be me, but I immediately turned my brain off and stopped caring as soon as the Ōtsutsuki showed up. It feels like this was supposed to go on way longer than it should’ve. Kushina bringing up her cancer is completely invalidated by her having a big beam battle with Salem (who’s also by far the least threatening force in the story) leads me to think that Kushina was supposed to have a bit more staying power before dying.

Don’t get me wrong, I still really like this story, but I can’t deny that the ending really fumbled things imo.

Now that’s a katana

Please continue this, it’s amazing.

Have to say one of if not the best naruto x rwby stories ever, so intriguing from start to finish, liked the fights, loved the romance and even all the new stuff you added and even the OC's they were so good everything about this was splendid, don't know why you're remaking it but that is your choice, really hope the remake is as good.

Isn’t it weird how everybody acting like lil horny hoes but be preaching to ruby not to have sex and act like the 2 year gap makes them wise beyond years with the knowledge and ability to guid ruby, like what?

i just started to read this to day and this story have such of a deep meaning that is actually crazy i wish to see more of this through out the story

Great job shame you stoppes writing the story

This suck 2 years and 100 chapter and you are remaking it. I don't plan to read the remake until you reach 50 chapters. Totally bum right now.

Damn. This Cardin arc was amazing. Wonderful character development!

well written and all, but not really a fan of how the integration was done. Just feels off, can't really put my finger on it. All I do know is that this is not what I expected when I started reading.