Reviews for Equestria Girls - The Legend of Friendship
johannvanguard chapter 7 . 4/7/2019
It's great that Star Twinkle and Twilight decided to stay in the world so they can prevent Sunset and Radiant from causing problems. When Sunset was about to destroy the portal, it was surprising that Radiant stopped her because she had gone too far. With losing the crown, the contest, and possibly her friend, Sunset got angry and tried to get the crown, which she did. She really did turn into a monster and even turned Radiant into one and the other students into zombie servants. It's nice that Star Twinkle tried to get the crown, but Radiant stopped him from doing so. I'm glad that the magic of friendship stopped Sunset, but Radiant was still a monster. Before he could harm Star Twinkle, it was shocking that Sunset stopped him because she couldn't stand seeing him like that. Once Radiant was back to normal and Star Twinkle was okay, I'm glad that Twilight helped the them try to make a new start and that they talked to Stat Twinkle as well. After the formal ended and the farewells were said, Twilight, Star Twinkle, and Spike returning home was fantastic.
johannvanguard chapter 6 . 4/7/2019
It's great that the school is united and the students will most likely vote for Twilight. Too bad that Twilight got in trouble and Star Twinkle saw the trashed gym. That was nice a talk that Star Twinkle had with Radiant, and he saw that Radiant isn't as bad as he seems to be. I'm glad that Twilight, Star Twinkle, and Spike told the girls the truth about themselves, and the girls believed them and decided to help them. The Mane Seven, and the students, working together to repair the gym so the dance would continue was good. It was funny that Flash asked Star Twinkle if he could dance with Twilight because he assumes that Star Twinkle and Twilight were a couple. With Twilight declared the princess, it was terrible that Radiant took Spike, and Sunset threatened to destroy the portal if Twilight didn't give her the crown.
johannvanguard chapter 5 . 4/7/2019
It's good that Star Twinkle and Twilight met the human versions of Rarity and Rainbow Dash. With Star Twinkle and Twilight having no idea about Sunset making a horrible video about Twilight, it's good that Rarity, Applejack, Fluttershy, and Pinkie came to help them. When the girls, except Twilight, argued, it's good that Star Twinkle tried to get to figure out what caused them to stop being friends. Thanks to Twilight, the girls figured that Sunset must have caused their friendships to end. It's nice that Star Twinkle volunteered in Twilight's place for the soccer match against Rainbow Dash to get to help them. With Rainbow Dash joining to help, Star Twinkle and the girls did a great job with their song to get everyone united and to vote for Twilight. I wonder what Sunset and Radiant might do to make sure that Twilight doesn't become princess and get the crown.
johannvanguard chapter 4 . 4/7/2019
Star Twinkle and Twilight running into Sunset and Radiant was nice. Too bad that Star Twinkle and Twilight still had problems understanding the human world, such as vending machines and computers. Luckily they found a library where they can research the info they need. It was surprising that Radiant Blast gave Star Twinkle a warning of what was to come, which showed that he may not be that bad. While Twilight and Star Twinkle try to make Twilight become princess, hopefully they can help the human versions of their friends become friends again.
johannvanguard chapter 3 . 4/7/2019
It's great that Star Twinkle and Twilight met the human versions of Celestia, Fluttershy, Applejack and Pinkie Pie. Too bad that Twilight didn't ask for the crown out of fear of sound crazy. Luckily she just has to become Princess of the Fall Formal to get it, but doesn't know how. It's terrible that Twilight and Star Twinkle learned that the human versions of their friends aren't friends with each other. It seems that Radiant is not cruel, but just supportive of his friend Sunset. Now that Twilight is running for princess, Sunset and Radiant might do some cruel things to make sure she can't become princess.
johannvanguard chapter 2 . 4/7/2019
I'm glad that Star Twinkle and Twilight got used to their new bodies and went into Canterlot High to search for her crown, Sunset, and Radiant Blast. It was surprising for Star Twinkle to bump into the human version of Steel Hammer, who is a woodshop teacher at the school. Too bad that Star Twinkle also bumped into Radiant Blast in the bathroom, and luckily escaped a fight from him. Radiant Blast didn't seem to be as dangerous as Sunset. Now that Sunset and Radiant Blast know that Twilight and Star Twinkle are at the school, I wonder if the heroes and Spike will find the crown.
johannvanguard chapter 1 . 4/7/2019
It's nice that Twilight asked Star Twinkle to accompany him to the Crystal Empire for her first Princess Summit for support, which he agreed and insisted that their friends come too. Too bad that their night at the empire was ruined by two mystery ponies stealing Twilight's crown. Star Twinkle and Twilight did their best to stop them, but the crown and thieves went through a strange mirror. Once Celestia explained that the thieves were Sunset Shimmer, an old student, and Raidant Blast, an old Royal Guard, it's interesting that the mirror they went through led to another world. With Twilight going and Star Twinkle chosen to go, it was surprising that Spike sneaked along with them. Now that the trio are in the human world and look like humans and a dog, I wonder how Star Twinkle will react to the human world.
Cloud4012 chapter 7 . 11/23/2017
That was great I hope you do the other Equestria Girls stories
Super-Nonymous chapter 7 . 11/23/2017
Well, this was an interesting story, glad I read it, not much more to say, so bye.
Super-Nonymous chapter 4 . 11/5/2017
This story is going along good. Can't wait for the next one, as always
Super-Nonymous chapter 3 . 10/29/2017
Another good chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Burku chapter 2 . 10/28/2017
I actually really like all of the LOF stories you have! I can't wait to see what you've got for this!
Dear Apollo chapter 2 . 10/23/2017
The story is coming along nicely.
Super-Nonymous chapter 1 . 10/15/2017
Good start, can't wait for the next chapter.