Reviews for The Hidden Truths of the Village Hidden in the Leaves |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the only gripe I have with this story are the numerous spelling mistakes or errors. U recommend getting a beta reader or just checking up on your stories once in a while to see and correct the mistakes. No hate ofc but I'm just telling constructive criticism and this story has been enjoyable so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() this girl has some serious problems. like wtf |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a really great story! I enjoyed reading it so much! I love all the changes that you did for the characters. And the relationships. Thank you so much for a wonderful hotel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Kisame. Lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 83 chapters in and first comment lol. I really like Sasuke's and Naruto's bond and it might be something I use for inspiration in the future. I like their dynamic and how well they are and that sakura isnt being forgot about in the background. The whole dynamic between the group is amazing too! I love the family bind theyre all creating! The plot is very interesting and i want to see where it goes. Uchitatchi is a very interesting character and i really like where you took it. It was hard to get past the first dozen or so chapters due to the miss-spelling, but im glad its far and few between now. There are a lot of points where youre infodumping the plot and i wish it was a smoother transition though. All in all, its a good read for a lighthearted adventure. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Made me laugh. Great chapter |
![]() ![]() Oya? Am I seeing some bits of itachi/kisame? |
![]() ![]() This is so weird. I've never read Kakashi & Tenzo but always Kakashi & Iruka, which is why this feels so not right. |
![]() ![]() Nooooo! Sakura! |
![]() ![]() Wait! Jsijagsbsjshsjshssjhdjajajahagsjwjahsjhsjs Did he just pecked Naruto?! I swear if I were climbing down stairs at that moment I would've slipped & hit my head & get out of this genjutsu! UCHIHA'S ARE BOLD! |
![]() ![]() OMG! That fight sequence was Amazing! But they... aaaaaa.. can they stop flirting?! Aaaa I'm red! |
![]() ![]() "He can find his own idiot. This one's mine." THIS! AHAHAJAJSBSBSBABSHBAHSBAJSBSNABJSBA |
![]() ![]() Yeah! He's already got the mangekyo! |
![]() ![]() I CAN'T! They were apart for one month & they are flirting so bad! What is genma doing? Wasn't sasuke already late? \\ \\ |