Hey, brain dead monkey fucking retard. YOU CAN'T TURN THE FUCKING RINNEGAN OFF. YOU CAN NOT TURN IT OFF. WHY IS THIS SO HARD FOR YOU MONKEYS TO UNDERSTAND?!

Good job.

Excellent job.

Wow.

Looks like akatsuki are on the move.

Well done with this chapter .

Thank you for making this a naruto rinnegan story.

He'd try to fix that pervert stigma during their trip? I hope you don't mean HIS behavior... It's kinda refreshing having a Naruto that's actually INTERESTED in the things a teenage boy should be interested IN (namely girls)... Him always being uninterested, or worse SCARED, of any and ALL members of the opposite sex was always VERY WEIRD to me.. I know it's done for some obscure comedy reason... But it really does get out of hand VERY quickly, since that's pretty much the ENTIRE focus of teenagers' mindsets... The uchiha can be forgiven, he's mentally busted(all the kings' horses and all the kings' men sorta deal), among many other issues... Naruto? Not so much, if the sexy jutsu is any indication.

You GOTTA wonder, if the Edo is SUCH an affront to nature and SO HATED... Why in the WORLD did the second hokage create it? What POSSIBLE use could it have, that isn't "evil necromancer"? Just seems a VERY out of character jutsu to create. Plus even when the second saw what it was.. WHY IN THE HELL DID HE WRITE IT DOWN?!

"Capture the Jinchuriki if possible".. This is one of those times that canon appears ABSOLUTELY FRICKIN BRAIN DEAD! That has GOT to be the DUMBEST order that the akutski COULD POSSIBLY MAKE... and I MEAN THAT... It is mentally retarded... Why? Simple... Kyuubi has to be added LAST! Any sooner and their statue goes BOOM! And their plans are WASHED UP... So WHAT IS THE POINT of a "secret organization" ALERTING all their targets of NOT ONLY their existence BUT two of their members:? Add to the fact that they have ABSOLUTELY NO WAY OF HOLDING naruto long enough.. (they have exactly ZERO tailed beasts at this point!) and they get ALL the villages' attention the SECOND they appear for this dumbass order! It is ABSOLUTELY GARBAGE in canon. The akutski SHOULD be AVOIDING NARUTO like the PLAGUE, until they AT LEAST have 6 or 7 of the tailed beasts!

Check on Hagoromo's family? UHHHH that might not be a good idea... They are doing rather POORLY.. The hyuuga DROWNING in arrogance and blind stupidity, feeding generation after generation of their family to the "man on the moon"... And the uchiha, just down right becoming the psychotic VILLAINS of the world! So yeah, might NOT want to "check up on them".

"He wished he could because Shikaku deserved it, but he wasn't that guy"?... WHAT? You know Ninjas are ASSASSINS, right?.. And if he's NOT that guy? WHO IS? If shikaku deserves it, then WHO ELSE is going to "punish" it? Who else has that kind of power? Who wouldn't take it TOO FAR? Naruto HAS to be "that guy", because nobody else CAN or can be TRUSTED!

The naru-verse is KINDA ripping itself to pieces because too many shinobi are running around like toddlers that have fully loaded automatics! They really NEED some "adult supervision".

I'm glad to hear that naruto will be OP.. He SHOULD be.. Pein is... And he just "got the eyes" and bam, first thing he did was kill someone ALL THREE of the sannin together couldn't beat! As a KID with BRAND NEW EYES... And that's CANON... If the bad guys can be OP, SO CAN THE HERO! It's great to see!

One of the best chapters of the whole story oddly enough. So I guess you went out on a high note lol

Sakura's reaction to Naruto winning sounded dead on like Ochaco from My Hero Academia.

You can't turn off the Rinnegan once it's active. I know you were brain dead already because you abandoned this story, but why would you add to your mental problems? Idiot.

started off well but you just had to add tayuya
that bitch is not hot at all, she's cho cho tier...and her attitude is even worse
literally could've picked any other female...

Not going to lie, just personal preference, but I wish there was less blushing and stuff... Naruto IS basically Hagoromo, a very old, wise sage, and i do not picture him as the blushing pervert type...

Your story, just airing my thoughts.