Reviews for Unchained By Lucifael
Spazzman29 chapter 27 . 12/4
You need to fix the last 2 chapters when you have some spare time, its not easy to read like this.
jabarber69 chapter 27 . 10/3
OUTSTANDING FUCKING STORY! But you forgot Thisnial the dragon and where id dobby?
EdTheBeast chapter 27 . 9/14
A fantastic story, a bit off here and there with the summary; but over all a must read. Unhappy where it ended though!
EdTheBeast chapter 5 . 9/14
Excellent chapter! Snape now understands. Music a magic or terror all its own.
EdTheBeast chapter 4 . 9/13
Fantastic story, especially this chapter!
EdTheBeast chapter 1 . 9/13
An excellent start to the story! Well done!
Mark Sinfield chapter 27 . 8/8
please carry on
siriuslyprongsmylove1 chapter 1 . 5/30
Basically this is a PORN story. if u want get a rise read this story..
NabikiB chapter 16 . 5/27
It's Hermione...demonstrated high intelligence would make her horny if anything would.
a.vago chapter 2 . 4/28
Smoking makes the man? I thought that was getting a tattoo...
hunzbookwyrm chapter 27 . 3/24
Great story hope to see more from you soon.
Guest chapter 27 . 2/23
Thank you for sharing! You da man/dame/other!
ptrtool1999 chapter 25 . 1/30
This is a great story. Hope it gets finished.
PGHammer chapter 16 . 11/18/2018
To those of you wondering why the Weasley brothers are scaring off Ginny's suitors - ever heard of "white shotgun" or the "shovel speech"? It is universal in nature - it's not unique to wizarding Britain - or even to the UK (I have heard of the former - and GIVEN the latter). Problem - they have no idea (except the twins) how overmatched they are in that department. And that is WITHOUT Molly Weasley giving Ginny hints and tips (which they don't know - yet). As to what the twins (with Hermione) have just come up with - think a Fidelius Charm that can be printed by Mundane/Muggle means - using any printer. (You heard me - ANY printer - from the cheapest dot-matrix to the fanciest laser - even color laser. In fact, Muggles can do so. All that is required is that the printer be able to print.) Even scarier, it works for any rune-driven anything - not JUST the Fidelius. (And you wonder why I have been rather surprised that nobody has even THOUGHT of Squibs as Potions Masters - it certainly is possible - even Horace Slughorn or Severus Snape would tell anyone that.)
Merlin Perseus Potter chapter 2 . 11/3/2018
Started good but now its getting stupidly unbeliveable
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