Reviews for TMNT retold
Colton Fox chapter 4 . 11/27
You should have a love interest for leatherhead and the turtles introduced later on in the story. You should also include a wolf mutant and alopex in this story.
ScruffyStarWarsFan chapter 4 . 11/24
This has promise. A rewrite or two and this could be really good. The plot is ok but I think perhaps you should work on the dialogue, for instance, when Splinter is telling April of their backstory it feels really rushed and unnatural. The same when Shredder is recruiting Stockman. But like I said, if you finish it and then rewrite it and change what doesn't work and fill in the plotholes, this could be a really good story
Egyptian Rose chapter 2 . 10/27
Sweet! Thanks for the shout out, that was my first one.
I loved the first meeting of the Turtles and April, nice use of the mix of TMNT books and movies. Looking forward to more.
Egyptian Rose chapter 1 . 10/20
Doing well for your first story. Great first chapter, easy to follow and it had great flow. just pay attention to the grammar and capitalizations.
I loved the way you portrayed the turtles and splinter. Keep it up. _