Reviews for A Demon Misplaced (Rewrite)
AceBlazer007 chapter 1 . 10/21/2017
Wait, did you delete chapter 2? ._. I receieved a notification about it only to find that there is no chapter 2.
UchihaNaruto247 chapter 2 . 10/21/2017
Ok i enjoy where this stories going again
Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2017
Man, I really like the premise of the story, but could you consider adding Asia into the harem. The reason being, seeing someone so innocent and cute may change Naruto back a little bit because of his desire to protect her
Newotouto chapter 1 . 10/21/2017
yeah.. 'yawn'...
thanks..zzzzzzzzts
Ignisha chapter 1 . 10/21/2017
that's too bad... Naruto x Koneko has been my number one guilty pleasuring ship in any Naruto x DxD fanfics... oh well, Rias and Akeno are close second and third respectively, lmao

sad that Helel decided to stop, but glad that he allowed you to continue on for him!
KilluaGodspeed chapter 1 . 10/21/2017
I'm just glad this story isn't getting dropped. Naruto dying and coming back in dxd broken isn't anything new, but I like how the story involves Akeno a lot more(she is way underutilized if you ask me).
WindyCitySlayer1 chapter 1 . 10/20/2017
Please continue
Can’t wait for more
DarkBlight chapter 1 . 10/20/2017
... sigh... why do you have to do this? Now I'll have another story to follow and favorite! But with all seriousness, this is another impressive story to add to your repertoire. I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
UnsanMusho chapter 1 . 10/20/2017
Hmmm... I look forward to see what exactly happened to Naruto all those years back and to see if can have some form of Closure with his demons of the past.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2017
I want the fifth chapter to come out hahaha, and thanks for adopting Helel's story.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2017
I have NO IDEA what the item Naruto received could POSSIBLY BE!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2017
Seems good. Unusual a fic with a cold Naruto who gives the finger to moral, i like it !
UchihaNaruto247 chapter 1 . 10/20/2017
Well guess i have to follow u and the story to keep up
SPark681 chapter 1 . 10/20/2017
So Rias got caught wonder what she'll do now anyways keep up the great work!
Lightning72X chapter 1 . 10/20/2017
Good chapter thank you for taking over Helel Morningstar – the Fallen original story. Hopefully he will come back. He is a good author.
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