hope you continue i was really enjoying this story

I'll be honest that I more or less just skimmed most of this since it looked to be the same as the original's first chapter, so if there's any minor changes, well, I suppose I'll see them in a second viewing. If anything I'm just interested to see where this story goes forward, especially in a hands of a more experienced writer based on what I've seen on your profile.

On that note I'd like to mention that you seem to be missing a lot of page breaks which is really confusing when it jumped from Rias's, Akeno's, and then Naruto's POV in the middle of the story.

Could not consider adding Koneko also in the harem? She and Akeno and Rias could help him. I think it might work, I like it when they use Naruto's words factor to help and motivate people to get ahead. Also keep in mind that while I understand your current view of things and remain isolated from everything and everyone, your old self should sometimes come to light, and it could only be justified in such a way as to make it perish like a Tsundere look like a Kuudere, or something like that.

Love the new story so far Rif, but in all seriousness I've liked all your stories so far, just sucks a bit when I'm sitting waiting for a new chapter on one of them and then another is either updated or a new one comes out sucha struggle xD but seriously good work :)

I'm glad you pick up this story because I read the original and was immediately hooked by the first chapter so I look forward to what you do with it.

Man this seems to be a very interesting story to say the least. I really can't wait to see where this will go. I wonder how this Naruto will handle being pulled into all this shit he now will find himself in? I think he would best chance not like the idea of the peerage systems since it is such a broken system favoring the pure blood devils so much. But I guess after seeing something similar in his 'time' it wouldn't be a shock to him tho. I am honestly really sad to see Koneko not being one of the girls, I think the three of them would be the prefect set to help him and give him something to live for. Koneko would be one of the very few who could understand him and have something to relate to him with. Not to mention it would give some diversity to the girls in his life but oh well, no love for my fav girl lol.

Anyway great chapter can't wait to see more

I quite like the style of this story. In a way it reminds me of End Game (version R), which unfortunately hasn’t been updated for quite some time.

I would only ask for it not to be dropped in a few days, i was/am quite interested in it and what spin you will give to it in the future, till then take care _

like XD

An apathetic, Uber powerful Naruto appeases me, a lot. If girls were to be added, which isn't the case, I would've liked Gabriel added, but alas, it isn't to be. But he can have her as a very hot older sister. At least I hope so.
So, question time: Can Naruto use Six Paths Sage Mode as well as the bijuu chakra? Or have the Rinnegan? Two things that would be awesome to have on him, but making him completely fly under the radar due to the fact that he doesn't want to do shit for anyone.
Would love to read the other three chapters soon!
And eager to see what unique spins and twists you're going to put in the story.
Kudos, Deathjest.

Nice start can't wait for more.

That was cool

I'm so glad you are continuing this story. It has been a recent favorite of mine.

Nice

Update and don't abandon it like that fucking asshole did.