Reviews for A Demon Misplaced (Rewrite) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Next Chapter cmon another. |
![]() ![]() Dude. Please Update |
![]() ![]() Update please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far, I've enjoyed this story. Naruto's killing and Freed and brutalising of Abathar are great. However, I have to ask: why are all the writers, including you, so unimaginative when it comes to the placements of the Sacred Gears by sticking with canon? The SGs had been created with the intent of them being used by humans to defend themselves against potentially hostile supernatural factions. Why the hell does Naruto, even in stories that I enjoy, always help deliver them to Devils like a lemming? And why does Issei always manage to cling to life like a cockroach? Well, it's about time Naruto stopped being a douche to Akeno. And speaking of romantic relationships, if you aren't going to kill or off Issei, at least don't torture Asia by making her fall for him. He is fucking useless and has done nothing of value during the rescue operation. Hopefully Kara is doing better by now. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() There are always fanfiction out there that do better than the original manga/anime, and some that are complete hot garbage. I am proud to say that I have found one of the former. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why didn’t this story continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah Nice |
![]() ![]() Hemm Saya sudah kehilangan hitungan dalam membaca ini sejak menemukan ini. Dan masih gereget Akankah dilanjut? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Una mierda este fin, 13 cap de un Naruto que parece Sasuke mejor cámbiale el nombre hijo puta |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, that was heavy... also, I can't stop reading. Next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry I haven't left a review for the last three chapters but this is just so amazing that I can't stop reading. Even now, I really want to get back to it! Amazing chapters and character interactions! Okay gotta continue reading. Amazing once again! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() please update this fanfic again |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. this fic is better than the original. a good read . waiting for the update |