Reviews for A Demon Misplaced (Rewrite)
SirExecuter chapter 4 . 10/23/2017
Nice chapter bro, continue the good work.
Btw, please seriously consider adding Asia to Naruto's harem and not just go with the cliche Issei x Asia pairing. PLEASE!
Paradoxity chapter 4 . 10/23/2017
If Naruto telling Akeno she was nothing to him didn't tug at your heartstrings, you are one cold motherfucker.
Loved it.
Frosten chapter 4 . 10/23/2017
Great chapter, hope to see more.
frik1000 chapter 4 . 10/23/2017
Well my terrible memory prevents me from remembering what the original chapter looked like and frankly I'm too lazy to look it up, so I'll just review this on the merits of its own.

It's good. There's not really much else to be said. The interactions between the characters are strong and believable and set the tone for a journey of healing and opening up in the future. It's established the base ground between Naruto and Akeno's relationship as well as fueled the interest from Rias.

From this point onward its all your work and I'm looking forward to seeing how you develop the plot and what direction the story goes.

Hopefully it doesn't involve any of the NTR stuff the original author kept mentioning.
Pedobear412 chapter 4 . 10/23/2017
Wow nice story kinda like the vibe naruto is giving off right now. Like the silent suffering type, dark but not emo. Love how you totally went empathetic with akeno this chappie.
I saw you had some fun with rias thinking she was in an anime. TBH I probably agree with her, most anime are being ruined by fan service. Dxd included, but hey they attract hormonal adolescent viewership right?
eva017 chapter 4 . 10/23/2017
This is beautiful!, please keep writing.
Mojavekoopa chapter 4 . 10/23/2017
I hope you can keep this going i really like this idea
merlin.mendoza.jker chapter 1 . 10/23/2017
please keep it as the three of then
pain17ification chapter 4 . 10/23/2017
This is WONDERFUL!
I love how you've portrayed everyone!

PLEASE update soon!
darwinsito chapter 4 . 10/23/2017
Ok sale espero con ansias el próximo capitulo
Apollodorus13 chapter 4 . 10/23/2017
Are you planning to take this the harem route? I do love this. It's completely different from anything else you've written but still just as good.
FunnyBagle chapter 4 . 10/23/2017
great, carry on.
Adol116 chapter 4 . 10/23/2017
Can't wait to see where you take the story looking forward to chapter 5
ZilarArness chapter 4 . 10/23/2017
I have both the original and now this revamp and i have to say i like this one a lot more. Keep up the awesome job.
alchemists19 chapter 4 . 10/23/2017
Well I am not usually one to review but I feel it a good time to review a story. I have read the original and I liked the concept. This version even with minor detail changes is even better. Naruto actions as broken are believeable and well written, his interactions with Akeno are great. I love stories that take characters and gives them even more depth then what the cookie cutter thing they are. They are people not tropes. I look forward to the wall around Naruto drops.
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